Arrows

Arrows

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Spontaneous write. Giving brevity another try.

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Cupid does not always shoot 

straight arrows.


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© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
The irony of falling in love.
We're often taken by surprise. ..

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sounds to me that arrow found its target... whether it got there directly, or via some obscure ricochet is of little consequence... enjoy the feeling that it brings.. it seems you now have more than one string to your bow and have mastered brevity...

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Dr. YumnaKay

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True that ;) Thank you so much for your lovely words, Neville. Always appreciated :))
Neville Pettitt

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my pleasure :)



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My Dad always said that if you go looking for love you won't find it. It will strike when you least expect it. Wise words from him. Cupid quite often misses the bull's eye with his arrows. I do enjoy your work Dr Y. Brevity is worth striving for.

Chris

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Dr. YumnaKay

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I think it's always interesting how love finds us when we least expect it, yes...thank you so much f.. read more
Unfortunately, in some cases he uses an AR-15.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

In some cases, yes...thank you so much for reading :)
so true...but those arrows have such an immediate effect, even if the shot goes awry.
j.

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Dr. YumnaKay

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They most certainly are effective...thank you so much for your words here, Jacob :)
After reading Sarah's review down there...I'm second guessing this cupid thing...maybe he is Aphrodite's nemesis..wreaking havoc with his red blood arrows...having the wrong people fall in "love" to destroy the real virtues of love...

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Dr. YumnaKay

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having the wrong people fall in love - I think Sarah would disagree with that :P but oh, I do think .. read more
Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Aye, have to say aphrodites is his mother :P and she's kinda a b***h too. Listen to the mythology :P.. read more
Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

*than haha
One thing i always laugh about with Cupid is how we picture him. Idk where we got the baby from but the roman god most certainly is not a baby. Lol. Actually; in the mythology he looks almost the same as the death god, Thanatos. And that's the real irony. So I always laugh seeing a baby representing Cupid; this masculine man with cruel eyes. Oh yeah, did I mention his eyes? Red as blood. Hahaha. Handsome but with creepy eyes. Not to mention I'm the Greek mythology lover so everytime I read Cupid my mind has this autocorrect that changes the roman version to the greek. So I see Eros instead of Cupid :P nice poem yumna, suddenly I have the urge to write the reality of Cupid. A disturbing guy that looks like death hahaha!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

I'll be looking forward to what you write then ;) Thank you for the mythology lesson btw. hahah
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Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Sssssoooooooorrrrrrrrryyyyy!!! I got triggered..... O.o my geekyness got the better of me.....
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

grrrr the 'read more' glitch...! I did thank you for that :p It was very enlightening ;)
sounds to me that arrow found its target... whether it got there directly, or via some obscure ricochet is of little consequence... enjoy the feeling that it brings.. it seems you now have more than one string to your bow and have mastered brevity...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

True that ;) Thank you so much for your lovely words, Neville. Always appreciated :))
Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

my pleasure :)

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