Writersblock (?)

Writersblock (?)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Ramblings. I can't write for s**t, I realized.

"


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actually, this isnt bad yumna. haha. i think white is very eerie. (still cant figure out why anyone would want to be a whitey... sorry- off topic) theres nothing. and its blank. like when the TV fizzes out and you get that awful blue screen of no signal. (and then it bursts into static and scares the hell outta you)
but yeah- luckily with paper theres no jumpscare. which sometimes is worse.... oh the anticipation for it to be filled..... waiting... tick tock tick tock....

idk where i was going with this review. so heres the moral: Thumbs up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

Ya know, I like this shape. Spear? The Romans loved spears... :D
spear all! Spare no one!read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

lol I think I like the shape better now too :P it was really an attempt to make you like structured .. read more
Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

:P hahaha YEAH



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In as much that you've (sorta) acclaimed this creative form, it could be made into an exclamation point, eh? ! (I'll message an example).
It could be a fingernail, a guitar pick, a rising thought or hot air balloon … well-formed, with very smooth edges; excellently done!

You're sooo entertaining and interesting, Yumna … full of surprises! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You do give interesting shape ideas for me to work on here, Richard! Thank you so much for appreciat.. read more
Richard 🍃

11 Months Ago

You're like a glorious, ever-changing chameleon. 🌈🍡
i do love this
love the shape and the words
the simplicity and beauty is here love it

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Julie. I'm glad you appreciate :)
Love the shape, love the sentiment expressed, love the economy of words, and especially the truth or dare bit at the end - it's the perfect description.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it :-)
Your poem offers the reader the opportunity to realize your great insight on the subject of writing. All too often, what you have penned has been a reality for many a writer.

Great job! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Writing, for me, is a blessing as well as a curse..thank you so much for your thoughts here and for .. read more
a sad situation we all go through
At least you have framed it quite attractively
Dave

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

The least it is, yes.
Thanks so much for reading :-)
Very nice...short, concise. The display is tantalizing. Great job 👏🏼

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Anastasia. Good to see you around here once again :).. read more
One of the best & most original statements about writers block & there are millions on a website like this! Becuz your build-up was so exquisite, I was hoping the ending would be sufficiently brilliant & it was. Truth or dare . . . that's the crux of it, in my book. The more truthful we can be, the better it gets (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I actually wrote this piece out of inspiration and just mulled around with the shape to kill time :x.. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

It's rare to get such a clean edge on your text shape without doing this as an image!
I like this Dr Y, it resonates with me as a writer. There is much truth in what you have written.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for reading and liking, Christine. :-)
actually, this isnt bad yumna. haha. i think white is very eerie. (still cant figure out why anyone would want to be a whitey... sorry- off topic) theres nothing. and its blank. like when the TV fizzes out and you get that awful blue screen of no signal. (and then it bursts into static and scares the hell outta you)
but yeah- luckily with paper theres no jumpscare. which sometimes is worse.... oh the anticipation for it to be filled..... waiting... tick tock tick tock....

idk where i was going with this review. so heres the moral: Thumbs up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

Ya know, I like this shape. Spear? The Romans loved spears... :D
spear all! Spare no one!read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

lol I think I like the shape better now too :P it was really an attempt to make you like structured .. read more
Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

:P hahaha YEAH

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