Father and/or Devil (Chapter Ten)

Father and/or Devil- Chapter Ten

 

     "You're the, the... Devil. But how?"

 

      He holds up his hand again and says,"That's not important now, my sweet daughter."

 

     For a moment I don't catch that last part. I begin to eat but then I stop before the food gets to my mouth.

 

    "Wait a second -did you just say 'daughter'?"

 

    He looks up and nods his head,"Yes, I did."

 

     I give him a puzzled look. "But I'm human, how can I be your daughter?"

 

     "Well... me and your mom had..."

 

     "Wow, no stop, I didn't mean that." I interrupt. "What I mean is that, how can I be human but yet still be your daughter?"

 

     "Well, I used that spell that you just said to make you seem and act human, and also to have you come visit me everytime you taste your own blood."

 

     "Oh, yeah that explains pretty much everything exept for this dream or nightmare I keep having."

 

     "That nightmare was reality or memories I have and the baby is you. That is why you can remember the spell."

 

      For once I am speechless, can't think of a word to say. So I go off topic.

 

      "Why does Nyx wear white instead of red clothing?"

 

      "Well, shouldn't you ask her that?"

 

      "Yeah, I suppose I should."

 

       So we finished eating in silence and after that I went to go find Nyx.

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[ebur™]

Hmm.. this is an interesting story, really easy to read and understand. I love the flow of it and I can understand Raven alot. The only thing I guess that I could criticize is that the chapters are really really short, but then again, the length of the chapter shouldn't really matter. Great story so far, interested to see where this one will end up from here :)

[Sean M. Addams]

i think what you have so far is very good characters are interesting and storyline is done well..nice job!!!