Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Peachy Keen
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This is a prologue of the book of Satan's Daughter.

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Prologue

 

      The door creaked open as a tall figure enters the room.  As he walked towards his daughter's crib, Hades, the god of the underworld,  stared down at the pale face surrounded by flames.  He drew the knife from his pocket, watching as it reflected the fire.  Stretching out his ghostly hand, he touched the cold steel to his palm, anticipating the moment to come.  He swept the blade down, licking his lips as the blood bubbled.  The blood started dripping down, towards his daughter's slightly ajar mouth.  "So innocent." He remarked.  The blood entered her mouth, and she stirred gently.  He began to chant.

"In the darkness she wakes,

This offering she takes,

To open the Gates of Hell"



© 2010 Peachy Keen


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Wow... this definetly got me interested in reading more. This going into my library so i can finish it later.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hi,
this is a very good book all around. kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was a really good opening. It made me want to read more. ♥

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great start, amazing hook. I loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great start as far as I am concerned. It definitely makes me want to start to story and see what is going on. Very well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I like this.. Love things that go bump in the night.. Moving on...

Mags xxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, quite riveting and intense, actually a very good hook, I really liked this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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