Prove your love to me

A...different kinda love poem

I want to spend my days loving you

To feel your touch

It will always be such

I never wanna let you go from my arms

I can’t resist your charms.

You are mine and I am yours

The only thing I know to be true

I wanna be with you till the end of time.

Every day we can kiss and rhyme

I want to wake up next to you

Day after day

I can't stay away from the way you play

You kiss and tease and please

Please don't leave me ever, please!!

Never could I bear to be without you

It's true 

It's not new

I think our love has been around since the opening of time

The ways that you know my mind

I can't find another explanation

I can’t fight your temptation 

The pain of not having you

Is with me for every moment that you're away

I need you to prove your love to me, darling.

Quit your snarling, my pet, 

I’m starting to get upset

The way you will prove it

Is something you won't forget.

Shrieks echoing off walls 

As I slowly rip off your skin

Are the sweetest love songs ever sang

There won't be a bang

I'll cut out your trachea

So be a good boy

And bleed out before me

That’s how you’ll prove your loyalty

How I’ll know you adore me

As you whimper through the gag

And your ruined body starts to sag

I'll know the words you're trying to say

I just know you that way

If it sounds like "please"

I'll know you're just teasing

You will gurgle and twist on the ground at my feet

What a treat that’ll be

Then I will know that you love me

I'll sit at the table

Eating your kidneys

I’ll batter and fry the strips of your flesh

Teriyaki

Then I’ll know you belong to me

We will be together forever

You are mine evermore

Author's Note

So...here's the backstory for this one: Ts and I made two separate love poems together, the first one was sweet the second one was gruesome. We were gonna publish it as two poems, but Ts had the idea to combine the two and make it into this! Randomly rhymed. Please enjoy :)

Reviews

[The Unknown Sith]

This is cool. I like it. Talent.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

First reaction- sickening


I can definitely see this as a horror movie.

[SavannahKay]

I don't have to read the intro/info on your poetry to tell which ones he's had a hand in..

Lovely writing skill.. but a bit too much "Dr. Satan"/ Devil's Rejects for me today - I'll try reading it another day

[Laz K.]

First reaction: "Sick."
A few seconds later: "OK, let's take the cannibalism metaphorically; I can stomach that."

I really like the first half, though. :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Interesting... i can honestly say I did not see the end coming!

[Coyote Poetry]

When love is near. Hold on tightly and make the days and nights last forever.
"Then I’ll know you belong to me
We will be together forever
You are mine evermore"
I loved the complete poem and the ending was wonderful. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Ziggy Matthews]

That was a very interesting poem! I was not expecting the ending. Someone underneath compared it to a Hannibal Lector kind of love poem. I think his might have been more horrifying since he normally killed those he despised. In this, there seems this kind of deep lust that is coming out of the author's pen. This deep longing for the other person. I think you do a good job of presenting it. I don't know what to make of the ending. However, great job! It was a fun read!!!

[Einstein Noodle]

its the stuff of horror stories .. Dracula, Jeffery Delmer, Hannibal Lecter and such ... reality stranger than fiction .. scary
E.

[Chris Shaw]

You know this started off so loving and then it turned into Hannibal Lecter without the chianti :) Gruesome ending. Kidneys eh? As I've said before you compliment each other. Your ideas are fun and wacky :)

Chris

[Nix is typing...]

Thank you kindly for the read and review, MIss Chris!!! :) It's always a pleasure to see your reviews!!! :))))