The Whispering Leaves

The Whispering Leaves

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A love poem by Nix and Ts (Rated: Everyone)

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 The autumnal haze

Gives a delightful daze

For days with no end

An abyss of bliss

The desperate kiss

While our love towers

In an overcast sky

We count the flowers

For countless hours

As color devours our souls

They extole and unroll

We have no control

As what lay unknown

No sway over the way

The subtle breeze moves the trees

Stray leaves float away

An array of a divine display 

As together we pray

In our own special way

With soft touches and kisses

Risking the vicious bliss

A sublime waste of time

While we entwine and unwind

They enter our mind

Those diaphanous thoughts

Memories of raw lips 

And sips of ambrosia 

from my lover's sweet well

As our passions swell

Let autumn define us

Throes of lust amid ocher and rust

We trust autumn

Though the wind might gust

It only drives us together

But remember

we will always have fall 

In sepia tones



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Author's Note

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I produced the seed for this one, and Ts (T.S. Ulmus) gave it a buncha TLC and turned it into the beautiful little flower you see before you!
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It's pretty sappy and lovey-dovey.. but BEAUTIFUL mental imagery and writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Good job, y'all! You must really like doing collabs with other authors. If feel like I see a lot of collabs on your page, and it's really cool to see. Great job!

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Thank you, Zigs :) I do love doing collabs and seeing how my brain can combine with others to make p.. read more
Lovely work gguys.This imagry is very powerful. I love Autumn too so that helps.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Thanks, Ghost! I appreciate your visit, read and review!!!
beautiful poem! The words seemed to flow effortlessly, even the words that rhymed. Thank you for this beautiful piece

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Thank you for your read and review!!! :)))) I'm glad you liked our poem! :)
I love autumn so very much, and to read such an elegant poem like this one it makes me love even more... It flows so softly through the readers mind, very good choice of words it got me from the very first line.
Beautiful to say the least!

Well done from me!!!
Stay happy
Sil
:-)

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

I'm glad you loved our poem! Thanks for the read and review, Silmara!!!
Ah yes, we'll always have Paris!
Or anywhere in the Fall for that matter, as long as you are with the one you love and conversely the one who loves you. The Niagara region is very nice that time of year.
The use of slant rhyme in this poem is quite nice.

Well done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Fall is very pretty in the North Georgia mountains :) A lovers (Or..."loved one" for that matter) pr.. read more
Enjoyed this poem. As a fan of fall and someone who has been in love for forty years, it hit for me. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Thank you, Anthony! I don't believe I've seen your face on my profile before, I'm glad you enjoyed o.. read more
A beautiful poem my dear friend. I love all the seasons of Michigan. The Fall is my favorite. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend. I was station in Georgia at Fort Steward for three years. I loved th.. read more
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6 Months Ago

I've never been there, I went to Fort Gordon to take the MEPS. Is Fort Steward in North Ga?
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6 Months Ago

Fort Steward is near the coastline. Near the South Carolina border. It is a beautiful place.
You gave me a prompt about taking a pull off a bottle of whiskey and squeezing a trigger while targeting immigrants. I went a different way with it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

I gave you the best piece of literature ever written and you turn it into this love-sick, tongue-tie.. read more
although I am not really into the love poem thingy, this is nicely done and you have picked an absolutely beautiful picture to go with

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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6 Months Ago

Ahhh, thank you so much, Dave! I'm glad our poem could overcome your aversion (there's probably a be.. read more

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Uh, what can I say? Hi! I'm Phoenix (Nix) 🔥 Most of my poems are in my books :) except for Phoenix Parker, that's a book I wrote last year. Most of my writing is poetry, I'm always o.. more..

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