Fleeting Moment

Fleeting Moment

A Poem by Nix is typing...
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Inspired by Frankie's story "The downstairs apartment" || A poem about two lovers who met each other online and can only be together for one night

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Maybe one day

Maybe just for one night

We can run away together

Let our passions ignite


This day’s been waiting for us

For far too long a time

I’ve wanted to feel in real life

The love you’ve given me online

The love that’s made my life so sublime


So today, just this once,

I’ll sway from the mundane

That reality displays

And run away with you

And let our love and passions thrive

And strive to drive our love alive


Maybe you’ll whisper in my ear how much you love me

When our bodies are pressed together close

Maybe you’ll tell me how you’ve been waiting for this

How you wished we didn’t have to say “Adios”


But for now, love

While we’re in this fleeting moment, just me and you

I give myself to you fully

To show you that my love is true


Tonight, you’ll hold me close

As you nibble on my ear

Soft kisses exchanged between us

Forgetting all our fears

A memory that’ll stay with us for years


I know tomorrow, we have to say our goodbyes

But I only got one night with you, baby

Maybe someday, I’ll have you altogether

A magical night encased in my memory forever

I won’t be able to contain myself at the airport

So I’ll try to hide my eyes


I know you’d never be able to leave if you saw my tears

But you brought me love like never before

So I got one last kiss

And said goodbye to the man I adore

© 2021 Nix is typing...


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oh, how sad a story that would be... and you penned it lovely dear Nix! You have such a natural talent for empathy in your poetic writing voice! For someone as young as you to be able to scrawl this way is pure God-given talent! I shudder to think about how amazing you will write when you are 50:/

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Month Ago

Thank you kindly, Bunny :)))) It makes me happy to see that you're the first person to review this!!.. read more



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It's sad but worth it, to love someone from afar. it's not always easy. I know... I've been there. My story ended in heartbreak. He died before we could meet in person. I say "in person" because our souls definitely met.
I loved your poem. Such a heartfelt write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago




thoroughly enjoyed ......... Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


Well done you anticipating what this type of meeting would entail. One night with someone special that you had met online before saying goodbye. A most emotional write. You convey feeling so well. A sad read and you carried me along with the story line. You are producing some great reads Nix.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Very good Nix.
The thought comes that this is an online romance that may or may not come to fruition in a physical form.
The longing is palpable ... the eroticism unmistakable ... all those things that a passionate love affair promises.
The writing is well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Month Ago

Thank you, Mr. Ted!!! :) I'm glad you could interpret my poem as it should be...I hope other people .. read more
I thought you did a great job of capturing the character's emotions inside of the piece. You did a great job of making us feel their desires and feelings they had in that moment. Good job! I'm excited to continue seeing you grow as an author.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your read and review and support, Zigs :) It's so deeply appreciated :)
This is terrific! Much better than the thing that I did. . Lil
I like the passion in this a lot. How very, very sweet too. Very well done on a subject that so many of us imagine ourselves being in..
Loved it!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Month Ago

Thank you, Frankie :) I was hoping you'd see this :) I'll probably edit it...rereading it over I rea.. read more
Frankie

1 Month Ago

Oh I agree! You should add more of them being together....no doubt,!!
oh, how sad a story that would be... and you penned it lovely dear Nix! You have such a natural talent for empathy in your poetic writing voice! For someone as young as you to be able to scrawl this way is pure God-given talent! I shudder to think about how amazing you will write when you are 50:/

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nix is typing...

1 Month Ago

Thank you kindly, Bunny :)))) It makes me happy to see that you're the first person to review this!!.. read more

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Added on March 16, 2021
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Athens, GA



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Uh, what can I say? Hi! I'm Phoenix (Nix) 🔥 Most of my poems are in my books :) except for Phoenix Parker, that's a book I wrote last year. Most of my writing is poetry, I'm always o.. more..

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