Wisdom Teeth Sockets

Wisdom Teeth Sockets

A Poem by Nix is typing...
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I think a chip got stuck in my socket

It hurt and throbbed real bad

My gums started to swell, I wanted them to stop it

I felt like I’d been in pain I’ve never had

These damn wisdom teeth sockets

Got me to scream and moan

I can barely move my jaw

Damn, I’m craving a calzone

But I can’t eat what I want

cause of these damn sockets

I’d much rather be exploded in a rocket

Or put in someone’s stinky pocket

Than ever again have to deal with

These damn wisdom teeth sockets

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Author's Note

Nix is typing...
I hope this was a relatable one. I got 'em removed like two months ago, and they're still causin' me problems, I'm getting tired of these damn wisdom tooth sockets.

Tell me what y'all think!! :))

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This is such a fun (w/o the pain) poem, it's light and bouncy, well rhymed, while still allowing the reader to understand the pain of getting your wisdom teeth out. Really great job!

Posted 2 Days Ago


I still have all my wisdom teeth. I didn't have to get them removed. I got really lucky. :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


light and ashes

1 Week Ago

No, the dentist said they weren't causing a problem with my other teeth, so they didn't need to be r.. read more
Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Ahhhh, makes sense :)
light and ashes

1 Week Ago

:) like I said I was really lucky!
Had mine removed many years ago. Didn't feel any dumber without them.
The pain will subside and you'll be back to normal soon.

One little thing ... line 1 ... remove one of the "got'

I sympathize with you on this one.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Nix is typing...

1 Week Ago

Ohhh, thank you so much, Mr. Ted!!!! I guess when you reread over your own stuff, you read what you .. read more
What a great poem. I like it because it tells the tooth. :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


You are a one, Nix 😎😎😎 All good Spoken Word material, and doubtless if things ever get back to normal after the Pandemic, you will be wowing the crowds at a Poetry Slam with Pieces like this before too long 👍👍👍👍👍

Posted 1 Week Ago



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Added on February 12, 2021
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Uh, what can I say? Hi! I'm Phoenix (Nix) 🔥 I love writing, and I love getting reviews on said writing. Whenever I'm not busy working on something for school or reading, I'm writing. .. more..

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