Breathe

Breathe

A Chapter by Nix is typing...
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Hehe, Ummm... please don't hate me for this

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Author's Note

Nix is typing...
I actually wrote this after I touched my neck to feel my pulse, don't know why I do that so often, but it's just something I do outta habit.
Tell me what y'all think about this poem!! I'm sure I'm going to love hearing y'alls interpretations of this.

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oh my .. brave to focus on such a topic .. as I read I followed the instructions .. breath in ... breath out... it starts out to be romantic or an invitation to know someone more intimately ... in a positive way .. creative and sexual tension builds as the pressure does .. to close in revelation of pain and some hidden desire for self destruction ... well done says i ... the progression builds with each breath .. I like it! well done! important issues start to finish says i! ... a very worthwhile poem ma'am.
E.
ps. Happy Valentines Day Nix .. wishing you well and safe :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I love this review, Einstein Noodle! It's so insightful!
Happy Valentine's Day to you, too!!.. read more
This was an amazing read, one that I clung onto every word and wished there was more. Great use of repetition, I too was holding my breath! Really great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I'm so glad I got that kinda reaction from you!! I tried to make it captivating!! :))) When I showed.. read more
Haley

3 Years Ago

Haha that's a great thought to jump to when reading this. It could also be read that way, it feels m.. read more
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3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Haley!! :)))))
Streets and avenues to explore. Intense at times building to the possible end or a continuation of mysterious followings. Nice work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your read and review, Duff :))))
Wow. This was such a mind blowing read. I forgot to breathe and now breathing in short rasps! You have one hell of a poem here!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I love this review, AJ!!! I'm so glad my writing could incite such a reaction!!! That's what it was .. read more
I was glad to find it was you in the end. For a while, I thought it was the Boston Strangler.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very nice use of words and thoughts dear poet.
"The questions beg
“What do I need saving from?”
Myself
Breathe out..."
I liked the personal feel of the words. Saving who? A interesting question. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I love your reviews, Coyote! I don't know why, but I always feel so special whenever I read one of y.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

It is my pleasure and you are welcome my dear friend.
i think you better make close friends with a nurse
just sayin

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Hehe, thanks Dave, but I'm not really into auto-erotic asphyxiation, I guess that's what this poem r.. read more
Dave Brown

3 Years Ago

Funny how things rattle around in the head
Take care
You've brought a very impressive level of detail to your experiences. I haven't been through anything similar, but I can almost imagine it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I'm glad I could get you to be able to almost imagine being in this situation, I tried to make it in.. read more
Wow, Nix this is powerful, i like the way you draw the reader in with your visual sense.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you, Kari!! :)
I've actually had the words "Breathe in, Breathe out" floating around in.. read more
I've read this type of writing on another site. Some will consider it BDSM which I never understood but it is popular with a certain crowd.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Ha, thanks for the observation, Relic. I actually had to look that up. I'm not...um...exactly a BDSM.. read more

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Added on February 8, 2021
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Uh, what can I say? Hi! I'm Phoenix (Nix) 🔥 Most of my poems are in my books :) except for Phoenix Parker, that's a book I wrote last year. Most of my writing is poetry, I'm always o.. more..

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