Open Heart

Open Heart

A Chapter by Luna

Seeing your face,
Your smile,
Your shining eyes.
My heart opens,
Pulling you in.
Every movement,
Every loving touch,
Every gentle hug,
I save in my heart.
My heart is open for you.
My love for you is saved,
Making the sparkle in my eye grow larger,
The joy you cause grow to the point of bursting forth
And screaming to the world that you are the one,
The only.
My heart is open,
And will never close on you.
You will always have control of it.
I love you.

© 2010 Luna

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A beautiful poem of love and hope. Love can make the world a better place. Description and the story in your words was very good. A excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

very cute, romantic to:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Generous and free-willing; Ready to indulge on the gifts being sent to you! Keep the heart open and every possibility will enter your open window of your soul! Inspirational and kind! Bravo!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 18, 2010
Last Updated on February 1, 2010



Civil War Capital, VA

I am a helpless romantic who also loves to attempt to write romance adventure (my novel Maiden Voyage for example) but I tend to try to stick more to poetry. I am southern (yes, I do have an accent) a.. more..

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