She (Has the Right)

 

Her waves caressed upon

The surface of my ocean

Her unseen undercurrents

Played with my deepest emotion

 

With her, words found meaning

A new language came to life

Vowels embraced the consonants

Composing words beautiful and rife

 

Her loving song became

The anthem of all my land

My sovereign Queen, is she

She has the right to demand

 

Now she reigns majestically

Her throne, I made my heart

Her Love rules my world

With beauty, grace and art

Reviews

[ForTheWorld]

Now she reigns majestically
Her throne, I made my heart
Her Love rules my world
With beauty, grace and art

...what a beautiful stanza, isn't it? I just love this stanza cause in this poem, this last stanza really caught my feeling, I just can't help it, smiling while reading this..lovely

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he wrote an ode for her
with all his love and might
and someone read and said
"WM, your heart is amazingly bright"

[Liza]

mother nature; she has the right
beautiful expression of gratitude and acknowledgement

[Emily B]

oh, this is wonderful . . . you've been around all this time and how did I never find you before?

[Hanan_Maliah]

Romance...it will always pull me! From those sweet elderly couples walking still holding hands to young children playing and building castles in the sands...

If you have a chance glance at Seven Veils and let me know what you think!

[Lady leah]

outstanding n lovely write, the words just flow from your mind to the page with elegance.

[Sheila Kline]

Such a beautiful sentiment of love and devotion, and romantic but with passion of the heart and will!
Your soverign queen is blessed indeed! May you always feel the romance of your heart....her throne!
Lovely!
Sheila

[Toni Stevenson]

This is a very beautiful and romantic poem, Love it!

[Pamela A. Lamppa]

How beautifully constructed. A love affair between letters to form language and indeed she has the right to speak. To shout her message and make it clear. This is quite well written and truly an enjoyable verse. Well done. ~Pamela

[just is]

This is a very romantic write enjoyed this.