Souls? A Damn Good F*****g Deal? Well My Ugly... Souls?

Just being capable of loving is my only wish..

But she destroyed that..

I hope she f*****g knows..

That little b***h..

And as I sit here writing again..

Well f**k me..

“Hello My Ugly”

“Hello Fallen”

“Why have you come here?”

“To devour a piece of your soul”

I spit venomous words at My Ugly

“I hate you, Just look at my poetry”

“I know”

“Then f**k off”

“I won’t back down”

This eternal internal struggle starts again..

As My Ugly takes it’s daily piece of my soul..

What the f**k am I talking about..

Something like a soul..

I feel unworthy of a soul..

Hey E.H. Can I sell my soul to you?.

You seem like a Devil to me..

Back to that s**t again..

But still souls are just a fairytale..

A battle of good and evil..

Hate and Love..

I hate this..

And just as I stand up for myself..

My Ugly shows and throws a punch at the f*****g fool..

My Ugly takes a piss on his unconscious body..

My Ugly goes out and f***s his mom..

Damn..

I’m really fucked up aren’t I?

Damn.. 

And then I laugh..

A brief empty laughter..

A fake laugh..

Just to seem normal..

And still..

“Hello My Ugly”

“Hello Fallen”

Figured out who My Ugly is yet?

Damn you f*****g idiot..

Would you get a f*****g hint?

My Ugly..

My Depression..

My Ugly does sound better though..

So f**k of with your damn commenting on my swearing..

Back to the s**t..

So I sit at 4:30 am again..

Still can’t sleep..

Thinking of everything..

This is just an overrated life..

Seriously  we were all made by mistakes..

Most people are an offspring of too many beers and no condom..

Why don’t ya get it..

And it’s still A Fallen Hero to you..

Author's Note

Creds to E.H. And just bring you honest opinion to this..
I know that i'll piss some of you off with this..
That's exactly what i'm trying..

So honest fucking opinion..

Fallen

Reviews

[Drako]

this interests me. i can see you're still in the angry stage. i figured this is all about your battle with your own depression, and it's an interesting way to describe it

[Cynthia]

I don't think you're right that we were all made by mistake thing. We are all made for a reason, we got a reason why we're living here and why we're still exist. However, other than that, I enjoy reading it, you're good at expressing your feeling, and not shy to be:)

Overall, i love it much, and i love how you tell a story in a poem :)

[Namelezz]

I f*****g love it. You are so good at expressing yourself. Your ugly should f**k off!
love the last sentences. It makes me think by alot of things. Thanks

Namelezz

[Coyote Poetry]

"Most people are an offspring of too many beers and no condom..
Why don’t ya get it.."
Mistakes sometime become life. A powerful beginning to the story. In the end love changes. We learn desire is a powerful draw. Real love are the people willing to stand with you on the good and bad times. Woman/men. We want too much and too little. Better to be glad to had swim in passion and emotion a few times before we are done. A strong chapter. You raised many good questions with this excellent chapter.
Coyote

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

I do take this offending in a way. The last three lines are not true. No one is a mistake, we all have a reason, if you know it or not. You'll find it if you ask. So, don't go and call yourself a mistake if you havn't lived life yet.

[Akshat♥]

This really is something...
its your opinion..and i don't mind..
but according to me.."least people are an affspring of too many beers and condom,.."
I think there is some truth behind these words..
i can understand,,when it happens to you..
you think that it happens with everybody else..
nice poem:)