Chapter Six

Chapter Six

A Chapter by The old me

Chapter 6: Hello
The story of the man and woman begins with a simple “hello”. Such a simple statement said to so many people and so often you don’t even realize you say it. It’s a statement said to the closest of people you know and complete strangers. There are so many ways to say hello. Hi, hey, hola, bonjour, yo and even just a simple nod of the head as you pass by a person. The man and woman met on a website that’s slogan was “You're now chatting with a random stranger. Say hello!” The chat process where everyone who is on the site, living all around the world, gets randomly paired up together. All based on no personal reference, no personal preference or any personal information. And out of all those random people, the random pairing system and random great timing, the man and woman got paired up. And not being a spoiler but they hit it off.


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You need to fix this long distance wise of the chapter. And it needs more details

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting, but I think it would be better if you wrote this through one of the characters' POVs. Take us inside his or her head and show us how he or she is feeling as they meet. Obviously it's just a casual thing at first--they're just saying hello--so give us a look at how their emotions change! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


OMEGLE!!!!!
xD
But you are right about that one, simple word. Good chapter, short though it may be :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


the thoughts on hello are incredibly true. such a small word with such incredible meaning, that is universally used.

Posted 9 Years Ago


NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


*sighs* im so impatient... hmph. |: |


CAN'T WAIT :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


ooo. Not bad. A little short but not horrible. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite the odd little ditty, but it was amusing all the same. Bravo :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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