FLOWER CINQUAINS (Cinquain)

Strengths...

BLOSSOM


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Flower

Beauty under the sun

It dances with the wind and rain

And brings feeling of serenity

Blossom

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SPINE

 

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Prickle

It makes deep cuts

That make one cry in vain

Protected  beauty in its own

Spine

 

Author's Note

Cinquain
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
Another form, sometimes used by school teachers to teach grammar, is as follows:

Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

Very nice again, one day when I have a lot of free time, I am going to try out these types of poetry.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Eddie. I know you're busy with your book and making poems is just a sort of your "recess" time in it.
God bless!

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks, you are putting these neat new types of poems out faster than I can read them. Quite impressive. If I was to try this, my brain would probably explode from the effort.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

LOL. I enjoy exploring and learning new things about poetry. I will try to make at least 2 samples of each form when I am in the mood to write again.

[Rachelle]

Sis, you know I can never resist a botanical poem!

We blossoms have to protect ourselves from the elements and from predators.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, you're right. Thanks a lot, sis.