LET ME LIVE

with your words

Just let me love you, please let me live
Care not if there's something to receive
Oh, let me love you from where I stand
I dream to walk with you hand-in-hand.

Can you let me love you through your words?
For they create my musical chords
Can you let me hear your precious voice?
With its symphony I could rejoice.

My dear, let me love you through your aims
Your main principles that set the flames
I love your thoughts like a precious gold
With such greatest story ever told.

Let me love you until forever
Don't break this off, oh please don't sever
Care not if there's something to receive
Let me love you, oh please let me live.

Author's Note

Just a random scribble with constant 9 syllables per line.

Reviews

[Blue]

I like the line "let me love you , oh let me live. " Seems to me as if "love" and "live" are held as synonymous terms which I couldn't help but agree. Only in living shall we express love and only in loving shall we experience life.

By the way, just a minor thing, Ate. I think you mean "its symphony" instead of " it's symphony." Also, I would very much like to watch your video in your featured poem but I can't access YT right now. I'm sure it's good, though. Best wishes!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, yes. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here and of course for pointing out the typo. =)

[Saddam]

My dear, let me love you through your aims
Your main principles that set the flames
I love your thoughts like a precious gold
With such greatest story ever told.

An outstanding write. You are such a beautiful thoughter. Love this.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot.

[Rick r]

Beautifully done, Dhaye.
I enjoyed this one much.
Rick

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, r. I appreciate your visit on my page today. God bless!

[Coyote Poetry]

"Let me love you, oh please let me live."
The above lines are the truest of love truth. When love is allowed to bloom. We are truly alive. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, CP.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Eddie Davis]

That was quite nice, Dhaye, as was the photograph. Good to see that you have patched up your differences with your Muse! ;)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie. Yes. I did it. Hope I can still be here now that I will be busy in school.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wowza, that last line really packs a punch in the heart, a brilliant way to finish off this brilliantly melancholy poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, sir!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome.