chaotic bliss

~ a poem format...

Slowly I move forward

Gently I wrap myself around to her warmth

Softly I kissed her shoulder blade

I was hoping for the worst

Leaving me a nose bleed on the floor

But all she did was closed her eyes

And feel me…

She didn't even flinch with my softest touch

She just let it be

Letting it slide from the moment we collide

the twinkling was tender

warm & intoxicating

I can’t get enough with that simple kiss

I look at her

Her eyes are still closed

Feeling each movement of my hands

As it caress her beautiful skin

My heart vibrate in tune with her musical cords

I touch her face to feel the gushing rush of her pulsing heat

Our eyes locked

Seeing, sipping the thirst we both ached

I travel the distance of our lips

going nearer & nearer

until I inhaled her warm breathless sigh

our eyes are both closed

feeling and breathing each other

then finally I say:

 

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“Stop me now for I can’t withheld my desire to kiss you & take your everything”

 

She replied:

“How can I stop you when I feel like this. Feeling lost between what is right from wrong”

“Excitement, regret, desire… All mixed up in this pinned up moments”

“If I stop you, I might regret it afterwards…”

“Regrets are holding me down, down deep into depression”

“I don’t want that anymore..”

“You've excite me, You've light up my desires”

“I didn't know I am capable of this feelings”

“The need that I didn't know I hunger”

“I think I am falling deep within the pit of your hallowed world”

 

And I said:

“I feel the same way to you.”

“I've touched you, and now I’m forever burned”

“Burning with the fires of our souls”

“This light is so bright”

“Have caught my heart and hugged it so tight”

“I feel breathless with you so near!”

 sigh, sigh, sigh

“I can never get enough of you, as if I am forever yours”

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After that final word

I closed the distance of our lips into a fitted kiss

Long and consuming

Our desires are brimming

Soul to Soul

Fire against Fire

shook every fiber within our veins

a shrilling need for peace

in this chaotic emotional bliss

…

 

Author's Note

I can't believed it come to this... i am still continuing this story... the chapters have gone many and i still have lots in mind to put... for now this is the last post...

if i am not writing my deep sad thoughts, i am writing this cheezy romance...
i hope you like it...
thanks for reading...

Reviews

[Corset]

lol! It's only cheesy to to guys, and a few hard hearted vixens! Other readers will love it, what would we women do without romance novels, you guys! geez! Dr Phil (lol, I can't believe i'm quoting Dr. Phil but in this case he's right!) Dr Phil says if a man wants to have relations on Wednesday he has to start wooing his wife on the Sunday before, soft touches, sweet words, sultry glances! woman are like a car, you have to rev her motor up to get her purring, you can't just start groping and go like men can and expect to get her there, she's a bloom for pities sake! I love this Paxie, you know what it takes! You are the one getting it right!

[Pax]

hahaha, I've watched dr. Phil, one time... and i think his doing great at what he does best... you're really funny dear friend, I always enjoy your witty and clever reviews... smiles, thank you so much... much much more... hugs!

[Corset]

see! even Pickle agrees with me :) you have to believe me now1

[Pax]

i do, i do believe you now :)

[Frieda P]

Your cheesy is blissful, nothing wrong with that, as a matter of fact it couldn't be righter, this is truly sweet and sassy and sensuous all rolled up in one, any woman would adore this!

[Pax]

wow, thank you my friend... a woman deserves romance in her life... :)
I am grateful you've read this chapter...

[gabrielle]

this piece gave me the impression that a prelude to that chaotic bliss is actually talking... talking.. and more talking.. hehehe. don't you know that too much too talking could diffuse the magic? kidding pax. you got a romantic soul.

[Pax]

LOL, no problemo.... I like the new pic, pretty and mysterious... thanks Gab, I am glad you are still reading this...

[gabrielle]

...hehehehe..pasaway naman mga comment ko. sana may ending..

[Pax]

the ending is coming soon, soon my friend.. :)