Save Me A Spot In Your Heart

Save Me A Spot In Your Heart

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Evening scribbles.

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Save me a spot in your heart, 
for I will rest there 

and still find my way 
through each of your 
tiny gaps and tiny cracks.

Save me a spot in your heart,
and I will leak through

your very essence,
like you ebb and
flow through mine;

a constant reminder,
that I am no longer
just me...

Save me a spot in your heart;
my heart ~ is tire...



© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay



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Dr. YumnaKay

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Very creative, Lady Yumna,
The way you've ended with your heart tired and fading away, blending into the soothing comfort of your lover's is sheer genius … you're tops!
As you know, I not only write in structured rhyming poetry, I've many Free Verse pieces posted, as-well, and I thoroughly enjoy a well-written version of this form … yours here is definitely an exemplary example.
Presentation, emotion, metaphor, spot-on syntax and line-breaks, choice of picture, font, and greyed hue set the perfect moment and nuance of romantically poignant passion and fervor that leads from lovers' attractions to their melding into one entity … beautiful!
Love the perfect accompanying music choice, too!

Love has captured You, and through your excellent poetry, Us … thank you! ⁓ Richard 🌼

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

Your words here made me smile. Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Richard. Glad you like i.. read more



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Having done page layout all my life on the job, I love it when a writer uses typography in a striking but subtle way (most go overboard, in my opinion). The ending text shading is exquisite, in the same vein as your messages are often subtle, & I love the subtlety of this one. I love the barely-there descriptions of seeping, which seems to be the crux of this intertwining experience (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

This review made my night! :D Your approval always encourages me to write more. Thank you so much fo.. read more
A spot in someone heart.
"Save me a spot in your heart;
my heart ~ is tired"
The above lines. "
I understand the above lines. My friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you too for liking this one, John. Appreciated :)
A real delight to read these words... over and over.... N

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

I'm glad you found it so. Thanks so much, Neville. :)))
Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

super words and true x
THAT LAST LINE, THOUGH! Love letter...love letter...love letter...wham! If you don't take me in, I'll be homeless.

I'm sure that you had, and others perceive, a more somber flavor for this, but my reaction was spontaneous and knee jerk. Good writing does that to a body, you know.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

I like how you say that. It is certainly my vulnerable side speaking...
thank you so much for.. read more
great pic... super intimate moments ... really appreciate the work you did to make that closing line fade ... how precious to be able to reveal such vulnerability to another .. let me rest here in your heart ... i am still with you alive and well .. but i just need a bit of rest right now ... the "tiny gaps and cracks" hits me particularly ... its like knowing and loving places one thinks are not lovable ... i think this is a romantic but kept it real poem ..
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

Aye, that was the intention. I'm glad you appreciate, Einstein. Thank you so much for your lovely wo.. read more
Pretty bad a $$ write in my opinion. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice tie ins as well. Thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much :))
I love the image that you have posted alongside your words Dr Y. They work very well together. Much love and tenderness woven into your lines. Happy New Year poet. All the best for 2019.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Christine. Glad you like it. Happy New Year to you too... read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Weeks Ago

I've come back for a second reading. This is such a lovely poem Dr Y.

Chris
This is why I would like to have you as one of my doctors. You distract me with your words!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

Hah I'm not as good in verbal skills, I think, so you'll be disappointed ;) Thank you so much for yo.. read more
Here is the poem that tells me so much. If real, more than a masterpiece. If a dream or picture pictured, your mind's playing the most beautfiful game with you. Though paced, controlled.. as it slows it takes off into a nother place for me [ somehow. This is a poem to remember, Yumna.

' a constant reminder, - that I am no longer - just me... '

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

My mind does often play games with me, sometimes I like to let it flow free..Thank you so much for y.. read more
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

Take care of yourself, please - now and into the New Year, ever and onwards. :) .
Your words remind me of both the intimacy of a heart and the vastness of it... the spaces in us that are worlds of life and lives. The line that sings as a sacred echo, save me a spot in your heart, seems so full of longing, of desire to not fade into that oblivion that is our forgetting. Some things never leave us... and some things are simply too painful not to let go...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

I agree..some things and some people just stay with us no matter what...
That line actually g.. read more
An owl on the moon

3 Weeks Ago

Yumna, have you seen the points you get for logging in, giving reviews, etc.? Well, years ago, you u.. read more

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