![lover of Sirius](https://writerscafe.s3.amazonaws.com/avatars/jackson_pic_nikno1.jpg) |
this is a story i started two years ago, i am currently writing the next story, carrying on from this one, i'm posting this up to see what people think, go easy on the critisising, it gets better gradually over time :) excuse grammer and spelling mistakes, thanks (:
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