Eden

Eden

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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another inspiration from Ana Sophia http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1448524/

"
with you
I can be
undressed
but not feel
naked.

in the garden
before the shame
there was
perfect love --
sinless.

and in these
secret moments,
you are my
own private
Eden.




© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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That is a good space to be in, where it is so good it is innocent.
This rolled out like a three act play, well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you sir, I rather liked this one myself.
The act of love making is the most beautiful thing in the world, even out of wedlock…
this is really a delightfully tender and sensual poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping in. I love your Christmas kitty!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

You are welcome, and thank you… I use it every year.
A amazing poem.
"with you
I can be
undressed
but not feel
naked."
The above lines are very true. When we feel free and unafraid. We know love and truth. Thank you dear Poet for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you, as always, my friend.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Beautiful, this is the perfect fit to Ana's poem. Love is like this, when fears are forgotten and freedom of expression and self seems to be the rule.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Nice of you to say so, thank you.
That is gorgeous KL.
Beautiful music too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you, my inspiring friend.
Matching Socks

4 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)
I think your sentiments are lovely. Eden is a lovely concept. Why then would I prefer buck naked sin in a briar patch? "In his own image!" I should smile.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Ah, thanks, I think, just as well I know you only as a naked tree.
╰☆╮oooooohhhhh I love this one! ╰☆╮

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I thought you would.:)
Oh I'm loving this !

So true naked is not a physical feeling. Before the storm the innate - calm moment. The desire for exploration through desire and passion.

Anyday, anytime anyplace.

Great stuff

Thankyou

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I appreciate it.
Love the opening stanza, it drags the reader in and the flow of this simple romantic piece is captured in the imagination.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Wow, thanks, from the king of swooning romance.
John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Hardly! lol
Ooh! Romance, at its heart - so simple, and simply touching, KL.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Ahh, thank you, I appreciate that.

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