inside your ache

inside your ache

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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a thought or two inside of me

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I want to bury myself
inside your ache
and snuggle up next to
each and every pain ...

I want to kiss away those little lines
that settle between your brows
and smoothe out the edges
at the corners of your should be smile ...

I want to give you all of me
and take away the things 
that hurt you
if only for awhile ...


© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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Gosh, Lyn!
Lovely flowers, and what's not to adore about a "real" love poem, one about giving of one's caring heart to another unselfishly, without expectations in return … only that they let you.
"I want to give you all of me" … goodness!
And, what a smooth write with perfect line-breaks and tender imagery to touch the heart of the most hardened amongst us … whom with warm blood could help but adore you.

You just keep getting better … smiles 'n hugs! ⁓ Richard : )

Psst!
Check last word "a while" (ie: we'll be there in a while [soon]), as apposed to "awhile" for a short time.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

12 Months Ago

Thanks for that, and the Grammarly remark.:)
Richard 🍃

12 Months Ago

You're worth every stroke! ; )
Nice. Grow closer.
I still think of you as KL.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

12 Months Ago

Aww thanks I miss you too
Awwwww. Right now I have those anime heart eyes. This is so cute and has melted my heart of stone. This is how I feel about this one person... They have all these pains and stuff and are so sad and convinced their life sucks. I really just want to admit I love them and I'm here for them but I can't..... So I just shut my mouth and say I'm their friend. Sigh. This is really beautiful and makes me smile because of how it applies so well to my life

Posted 12 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

12 Months Ago

I am glad it made you smile
This is one of the most affectionate & endearing messages I've seen from you. I have to admit, sometimes I wish I'd known someone in my life who felt this way about me. It's the ultimate expression of caring (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 12 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

12 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
'should be smile' - I like that. Like someone intent on smiling but something or the other keeps them from it...
This piece shows such devotion. Some people are special just like that, that we want to do anything for them.
Heart touching write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.
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Wow, THIS is a beautiful love poem! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

oh thank you, that means a lot, coming from you
These words are so good & as I see it, so very necessary to get off your chest, like a tepid sponging for a loved one with a raging fever... still got my fingers crossed..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
I like it, but it does sound like the audition essay for "Wife of the Year." If so, you get the tiara, the sash, the convertible and the all -expense paid cruise.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

I am all that and a bag of chips, and up until recently, a terrible judge of picking partners. :) ni.. read more
Think of a child in this poem
The pain and the helplessness you want to take from them.
A lot of pain in this write.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Yes. I was thinking of a lot of things. Thank you
this shows such selfless love...so intensely.
It's really NOT about what we get back is it?
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

You are so right.

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Added on September 29, 2018
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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