Loving Preparation

Loving Preparation

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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♥️♥️♥️✔️✔️👄👄✔️✔️♥️♥️♥️

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Lovingly prepared

By my wonderful wife

A banana chocolate chip loaf

Came into my life

And so that between us

There’d be no strife

I ate the whole thing



© 2024 Dave Brown


Author's Note

Dave Brown
Ghoulish Little people
Offer this valuable advice
If person parts aren’t tasty
Add some pepper n’ spice


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Well who doesn’t like banana bread with chocolate chips. Although you should probably have shared a piece or two lol the simple things are the best sometimes

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

share??
what is this share???
I will have to consult my dictionary........!!??
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Too funny okay maybe no sharing
What a tasty way to keep a marriage together....
a very smart recipe...to eat the whole thing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

I concur
that was precisely my intention altho', she did say something about going to see her.. read more
By God, chivalry isn't dead after all.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Well, at least as long as banana loaf is involved, Although, come the very next day, you will see I .. read more
A tasty treat! 🙂
You're very lucky. Sweet little poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

quite true
I am indeed a lucky guy and it doesn't take a loaf to know it
Thanks for vi.. read more
This is a really sweet thing to do for your wife!
Amazing authors note too

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

kind words
i know you like that bread, and double sweetness, actually two flavors one for mom and one for you. i will get some nail colors thinking, for the beloved ladies. i wish i could apply them on their fingers.
i wish happy Holi, a colorful life to go ahead with.
I am like i can be with any age group, its not the skill that matters, love for thee and care for them, this makes difference how one feels about others and what one should feel. I like to love my beloved ones, yea i do say in harsh but its not hatred, thats just vent off thoughts from ethic less brain.

this poem is best compliment and your heart felt thoughts. Thank you for sharing.

-jessy jacob,
a loving heart


Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

thank you
JessyJacob

1 Month Ago

mentin not, glad to see your reply.
JessyJacob

1 Month Ago

mention* typo

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