Lotsa Snow

Lotsa Snow

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Lotsa snow had fallin when finishin our snore

But, time for our little white dog out the back door

Tho’ after wanderin away for his morn’s chore

We weren’t able to see him no more

 

Snow was fallin with great energy

Making him priddy impossible to see

Purdy durn soon snow was up to my knee

With him becomin a snow hidden absentee

 

T’was then I saw a small snow pile move cross the deck

And thought to myself, hey, what the heck

Till out of that wee pile popped a white head and neck

Which straight toward me, continued its trek

 

The whole issue had been sumkina to-do

Just for a short-legged pup, to have a quick poo-poo

He, happy to have the whole issue all through

Makin a warm bed next spot to head to

 

 



© 2024 Dave Brown


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Winter is here in Michigan. Zero degree and snow. Keep the animal inside unless need to release. A happy ending to the wonderful tale Dave.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

My apologies
Somehow I missed this
The only positive is that it has warmed up and the .. read more
reminders of the adventures of me and milo. a shame you couldn't teach him to shovel and toss rock salt ... :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

Actually, he does toss his "kong" which earns him a treat,
My wife is still training me
Will stop laughing in a minute! What a happy happiness you have written here, and so easily imaginable via your wording. As to the hero of the piece,. gorgeous!

Many thanks a fall of happiness on yet another dreary UK Sunday!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

thanks emma
all went well with no apparent negative aftereffects and he has now created a sma.. read more
emmajoygreen

3 Months Ago

Laughing, he might be small but - he knows what matters!
What a very cute little doggie. Your poem is equally cute Dave. Like Mauricio, I pictured a patch of yellow snow:) Bet little cutie was pleased to get back in the warm. No snow here, just floods after excessive rainfall.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

definitely glad to get back indoors especially when our current temp is -10 altho, we are supposed t.. read more
When you gotta go, you gotta go, weather be damned.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

thankyou for those words of wisdom John
stay warm
Lotsa snow and White dog impossible to see unless you look for the yellow snow, lol,thank you for sharing

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Months Ago

Don't get me wrong, love the work, it just made me think of frank zappa
Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

i was thinking of streak across the desert by Diarrhea Dick
I would never take you wrong
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Mauricio Montoya

3 Months Ago

Oh okay I have to check it out, have a dynamic and harmonies day

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