Last words

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used to think 

they'd not come soon enough
always takes a bit of shake up 

      to make you want to go
takes a bit of shake up

 to make you want to stay
it's a cycle of being 

    shaken and stirred
shaken and stirred
and one day you're on top of the world
next you're a broken girl
    f*****g disturbed
trying to find the right words
    finding solace in phrases
always living on the verge

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Reviews

[Gee]

Out dear friend Deb, who I have written about a few times, said two things before passing. Firstly she asked her daughter for a glass of wine and then she asked "am I in heaven yet" before then slipping away...Jesus just writing that has me welling up. She is so missed :(

[Ana Papaya]

You've shared a bit of Deb before. She sounds like someone incredibly special. 💛

[Gee]

The best...

[Franky]

I get it. Indeed. Unfortunately.

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks for connecting with the words. ✌

[Franky]

I understand I think.

[Franky]

It's painful though. And exhausting.

[alexAlexander]

I like this one. It speaks to all of us—our lives.

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you Alex. I appreciate that 🙂

[alexAlexander]

You are welcome.

[Vol]

Ana,
Wouldn' it be nice to plan so we say something to make people straighten up and fly right... nah. I have a feeling it'll be "OW!" or, " OH, S**T!" Then I'll have to spend all eternity explaining and apologizing...
Vol

[Ana Papaya]

Lol! I hope that's not the case, Vol!! :)

[willweb]

I have at times wondered what my last words might be. Not sure what they would be but they would probably rhyme. Very cool. Another edgy piece that appeals to me.

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you. Not sure what mine would be. But I would not be surprised if you went out with a rhyme. 😅