Enigma

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i am ready to waltz

through the remainder of my existence

letting stories unfurl, and

narratives dip, curtsy and twirl

as i embrace this life

this enigma

~•

Reviews

[Neville]

Tis a mystery why more folk don't do exactly that but instead get caught up and drawn into things that don't matter or they certainly can't change .. this is a real little gem Ana .. the association between dancing and freedom is first rate .. Neville

[Ana Papaya]

It gets easier with age I guess. I've earned the right to be less bothered by the trivial. Thank you Neville.
Always appreciate your visits and thoughts. ⭐🌷

[Ken Simm.]

The music of this is so fine. Lovely wordsmithing.

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you Ken, I appreciate your kind comment.

[Poetic Beauty]

I think that is a thrilling and exciting way to view life and its many stories.

[Ana Papaya]

Appreciate that, PB. Thanks a bunch 💛

[The_Ancient_Rock]

This enigma of life indeed...
Truly it is a waltz we all must dance.
Good short poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
Keep it up! Take good care.
😄

[Ana Papaya]

Hi T_A_R!
Thanks for popping in on me today. 🙂
Glad you enjoyed!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.
😄

[Vol]

Ana,
I love a good mystery, but always figured dancing through the confusion is as valid a response, or even answer, as any other.
Vol

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you for sharing this dance with me, Vol 💃

[Vol]

m'lady.....

[Ana Papaya]

..... 🙃🙂

[Betty Hermelee]

love this little piece Ana... it shows us that, no matter what baggage you may have or what mysterious world you may be in, dancing is a way of expression, of freedom, of love, of fulfilling life as you see it.... excellent!
Warmly, B

[Ana Papaya]

Hi Betty! Good to see you. 🙂 thanks for your appreciation of this one. I'm glad you liked and I appreciate your comments. 🌷

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Ana
Warmly, B

[Dave Brown]

You will find that age suddenly arrives much too quickly which has even a bit of freedom's dancing go a long way
Ms. Papaya

[Dave Brown]

BTW, I am inclined to suggest that you allow the masses to respond to your "Dog" offering.
Actually, it was my dog (sweet soul that he is) who offered the suggestion.
A.P.

[Ana Papaya]

My dear Eddie is almost as old as I am now (in dog years). 🐕 🙂 thanks for visiting me Dave!

[JD Major]

Love this!
You've nailed the mystery,
and a happy way to cope!
JD

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks JD. 😊 much appreciated

[Desert Knave]

A beautiful philosophy encapsulated in so few words. ~Jim

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you so much, Jim. 🙂💃

[Davidgeo]

Free the bird my dear... it feels terrific doesn't it?

[Ana Papaya]

Yes, it does feel good! 🐦

[willweb]

Like Led Zeppelin sang, "Dancing days are here again" To dance the days away, facing the future head on, knowing full well it is no match for you. An encouraging and uplifting piece. Fantastic as usual.

[Ana Papaya]

That's a great song. One of my fave Zeppelin songs.
👍🙂
Thank you for the visit and those kind words about my poem.