singed wings and cartrophen kisses

singed wings and cartrophen kisses

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

on thoughts from Ana Sophia's love songs

"
she describes it
as hard wired
for love --
a moth
to a flame;
her wings are
singed
but she can't
help it
she is at it again
she'll only need
a shot of
cartrophen
or two
to kiss away
the pain.



© 2018 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
Read Ana Sophia's poem hardwired
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1445656/
Cartrophen is a Veterinary pain reliever


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Sometimes there is good in being bad, it can be very liberating when we feel like life is suffocating us.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

I think there is just no way around it. Some of us will go for love even when it burns us.
Good music and amazing poetry. The first time I heard the group. I like the energy and the drive of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and music.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Really? Well, it is a good song, and thank you.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I agree. I love music. Give me reason to write.
Haha!!! Awesome, I love this.
Ok, now I get why Mark reviewed my poem with a HELLYEAH!
Love the poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

I'm doing the rounds! :)
That's awesome, I was wondering why I had a few new faces pop over!<.. read more
Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Eden was inspired by you too.:)
Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

I just read that one too! :)
If love is a leading cause of arthritis I must be Casanova.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Well, that may very well be true.:)
Tried it and all ! Yeah! but if I may answer from a personal point of view and respectfully yours would be "Are you out of your mind?" If somone did 10% of what some of you have gone I would love sollitude anf lonelyness more than I already do. In fact you ladies are advocating for celibacy and monastic life. Yet you are it again?

Baffles me but then again you guys are from Venus right? I'm still stuck in the neverending..

Thankyou

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Yeah, it is a little much, sometimes.
Rene Salinas

6 Years Ago

One thing is to love the players another to love the Game...
It is wonderful to draw inspiration from others. This is indeed inspired and as always you take a subject and turn it into a garden of expression.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
To a moth who is attracted to flame even it meant great pain and losing its only way of transportation .oh yes death too is mind buggling . I wonder if human can be like that too . Love perhaps or vices . I know animals learn from painful experience to avoid such encounter in the future if they manage to escape . That's how they survive . But the moth is really different . Its like it never learned and keeps committing the same mistakes again . I hope they put a glass outside the fire so the moth wings won't get burned .
Enjoyed the thought of this piece KLG .

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you, and it came from Ana's thought, that we must love at all costs.
NeiL ArandA

6 Years Ago

That is brilliantly beautiful . To love at all cost . Its probably why love always win . Love also k.. read more
"to a flame;
her wings are
singed
but she can't
help it"

Beautiful and sad KL...Nothing like kissing that pain away and start anew...Excellent...:).......................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it was an inspiration from Ana.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...Good for Anna...:).......................

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