Our Last Summer

Our Last Summer

A Chapter by Luna

Walking down the beach,
Hands touching,
Feet coated in golden sand,
The sunset turning the ocean shades of red,
Orange,
Yellow,
Your eyes the color of the sea shining.
Everyday we would do this,
Walk down the beach,
Wishing the summer will never end,
My thin, white dress blowing against my body,
My blue bikini straps showing.
The striped blanket laid out in the cove,
The rocks surrounding the tide pool,
Alienating us from the surrounding world,
Supplying us with our own personal beach.
Your muscular arms wrapped around my waist,
Your lips bruising mine with your fervent kisses.
Every day goes by,
Memories implanted in my mind
As we lay in the sand,
The sun bleaching our hair.

The last day comes,
The waves crash on the beach differently.
Our last walk,
Hands together as if it will never end.
Our last embrace,
The embrace of a lover who will be seen again soon,
Kisses as deep as ever.
You explain this is the last time,
You are leaving,
You turn your back to me,
You leave me behind,
Walking up the beach alone.
Walking home
Where your girlfriend waits.


© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
Was inspired by a song.

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I think this was an awesome poem and good luck in my contest

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very good descriptive words, very beautiful but sad in the end. Well done. I liked it.

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Ah youth it has such rose colored glasses


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Throughout the entire poem you can feel the romance between the two... The end wraps it up with a twise, yet in the perfect way. I really liked this poem. Listen to music more often, maybe you will get more ideas like this

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oh i liked it a lot ;D

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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was sad because the girl was cheated on I like it how it flows I feel like im there.

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by the way i love the song our last summer from mama mia/abba, if that's what your'e referring to ;)

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A poem that flowed wonderfully with beautiful images that create wonderful moments as you described, but the ending was sad. Good job on this...

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A very amazing poem. It has a great description and some amazing word choice. Great job,

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the poem is really great. it flows smoothly and well written. i liked it! :)

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