~ Upon my stars ~

~ Upon my stars ~

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Inspired by a dream. I grew fond of this style...

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I wrote a dream ~ upon my stars

where fantasy laughs in symphony, 
and the raging storms murmur sweet melodies; 
 I feel the softness of your skin on mine 
as our halcyon breaths mingle ... 

upon my stars ~ I wrote a dream.







© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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A dreamy, delicate and powerful write Yumna that literally engaged me from the beginning, especially that picture that went with it!
The descriptions of the raging storms to the softness of the skin made me breathless and I just loved it!!
Well done, keep it up!!! :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Shaan. Glad you like this piece (:



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Dreamy like magic, You left Your spirit to soar high with that tender sense of Yours, I understand why You became fond of this style, it carries us upon a fluffy cloud, noting to be said but to feel the emotion... lovely like always.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

I'm glad you felt the emotions here. Thank you so much for appreciating. 😊
Beautiful picture and equally beautiful words.. they come from a special place, Yumna.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Em. They indeed do, I think... Glad you like the pic too 😊
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Smiling... trying to do so more than recently too!
Extraordinary and gossamer. A starlight poem if you like.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Ken 😊
a beautiful dream....if only it could come true, and we found peace in all there is, evil and good...

j.

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

If only, yes...thank you for your words here, Jacob. I appreciate it 😊
Beautiful pic fitting poem

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Elario 😊
I love that you find inspiration in your dreams. This is absolutely stunning, filled with the sacred visions only dreamish nights can bring. May those stars speak endless of your thoughts.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating and your lovely words, Craig! Glad you like it 😊
An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

there are 7.5 bajillion people on earth, and I'm very thankful you're one I can call "friend"... and.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

I'm glad of that 😊
Ethereally lovely title and lyrical poem..""upon my stars- I wrote a dream."- a jewelled line. Beautiful language, flow and celestial imagery. Mystical, magical, mellifluous. Love this!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Annette! Truly appreciate it 😊
Gods, that is gorgeous. It really has a mystical, dreamy feel to it, gives me the feeling of floating. the fact that it was inspired by a dream makes me even more interested. Dream interpretation has always been a big interest of mine, just dreams in general peek my interest. This conveys a sense of love, warmth, and comfort that's refreshing to feel in such a sad, cruel world now a day.
Great job.

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Sinbulvinter

2 Months Ago

Well, based on the choice of words and what I believe you're trying to convery here. I think the dr.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Wow, that's a really nice interpretation (and I think kinda accurate too) based on the situations I'.. read more
Sinbulvinter

2 Months Ago

Well, I'm excited to hear it sounds accurate. haha
Dreams of falling usually mean anxiety or.. read more
The use of the phrase 'upon my stars' adds wonderment to the ethereal nature of this. The dream itself - it's Universality is wow-ing the dreamer but the dreamer is wow-ed at their own ability to create that dream - as if they doubted themselves greatly.
There are 4 stages of two or more people becoming one 'entity' - Forming, Storming, Norming and Performing. This poem encapsulates the first three - all's left is the performance and that is the dream.
Great little piece Yumna.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

And here I am wow-ing at this review of yours, Tony! Abs love your words and the way you described t.. read more
A dreamy, delicate and powerful write Yumna that literally engaged me from the beginning, especially that picture that went with it!
The descriptions of the raging storms to the softness of the skin made me breathless and I just loved it!!
Well done, keep it up!!! :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Shaan. Glad you like this piece (:

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