Profound

Profound

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Inspired by Neville Pettitt's poem 'A Thirst Well Quenched'.

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I buried my fears 

in the crook of 

your arms. 




© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
A lot of ways of saying I love you, and here's an example. ;)

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it is profound Doc. ... to describe a setting for everyone instantly based on one's own experience of having a safe place in the arms of another .... but this can be taken another way as well ;) did i just trust to the soft part opposite the elbow ... or did i lay me self bare to a ................crook ;))
seriously .. i love the moment you share ... emotive universal and three lines/eight words ... it is "Profound" indeed!
E.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

And I love your thoughts here, Einstein! They do provide another another to the piece. I agree, how .. read more



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it is profound Doc. ... to describe a setting for everyone instantly based on one's own experience of having a safe place in the arms of another .... but this can be taken another way as well ;) did i just trust to the soft part opposite the elbow ... or did i lay me self bare to a ................crook ;))
seriously .. i love the moment you share ... emotive universal and three lines/eight words ... it is "Profound" indeed!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

And I love your thoughts here, Einstein! They do provide another another to the piece. I agree, how .. read more
Everything needed in the few words. No wasted words or thoughts. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you think so. Thanks so much for appreciating :)
How lovely is the action you so describe.. how lovely the words you use to describe it so.. my face smiled even before the message registered....and still is N:)

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Glad it made you smile, Nev. Thank you so much for reading and for the inspiration, of course :D
Neville

1 Year Ago

am still smiling even as I returned to check on ya... :)
So beautifully expressed, Yumna... sweetest inspiration. I knew this kind of love once... fearless love... May it find you and make you bolder with every breath. It is truly profound.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words here and for appreciating, Craig. x
Simple, bold, and true. I am truly inspired by the leaps you've made in your writing. For all its faults, that's why we come here

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That humbles me. I definitely come here to be inspired by writers like you :)
Thank you so mu.. read more
Simple but beautiful...such a sweet poem.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one. Glad you like it :))
and they were assuaged in that embrace....

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lovely words, thank you so much for reading, Jacob. Appreciated.
I love short poems! They're so powerful. Great job on this one. Xo

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Gullia! Hope you're well. x

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