Dreaming Realities

Dreaming Realities

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Double Etheree. Inspired by Mallika Relives' double reverse etheree 'Transformation'.

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Her 
world now
revolves 'round
a bundle of 
joy which she holds in 
her arms, oblivious 
to the difference it makes; 
his tiny hand wraps around her 
finger as he yawns and falls into 
a deep slumber... her worries seem to fade.
One little hand, enclosed in another 
much larger hand; the toddler's eyes then 
twinkled wide as her laugh tickled 
the billowy clouds passing 
by. The raindrops fell on
the princess's cheeks...
'twas then she woke 
up from this 
dream and
sighed.  


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Dedicated to my sister and for my niece and newly born nephew :D

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What an amazing tribute and form poem. When the form of the poem makes it that much stronger You can be assured you hit the nail on the head, and you did that here. The tone and subject matter are as sweet and endearing as it gets and the emotions are really fleshed out well. Exceptional piece!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I tried to kill two birds with one stone, so to speak. ;)
I'm glad you appreciate. Thank you.. read more



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This is amazing on so many levels. It's one of my all-time favorites of yours. First, great use of the form. Second, your descriptions of touch & holding are so intensely palpable! Last but not least, your message brought back so many memories of when I was in my 20's & all my people were having babies & I just disappeared for them. They no longer wanted to go do the stuff we always did together. Since I was not into having kids myself, our lives broke apart over this. But you describe so beautifully & with such understanding, how it is when you're totally mesmerized by your own child (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Well, I do think kids change the whole scenario, and experienced it too when most of my friends had .. read more
one eternal miraculous moment when those little fingers close on one's "big" finger .. congratulations to you and your family ... your poem weaves a gentle peace, grace and joy of motherhood ... you are so very good with forms ...it sets your poems apart ... my older daughter will deliver this Dec. ;))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Aye, a year ago, I didn't think I was capable of loving babies, but now... :P congrats to you and yo.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

we thank you...and you are certainly welcome..i am always excited to read your posts ..never disappo.. read more
Beautifully written, as always, my friend. The poem brings light and happiness in this dull world. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

So glad to have you reading this one, Gullia! Thank you so much for appreciating. x
You have captured the motherhood beautifully Yumna... lovely poem ... :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you think so. Thank you so much for appreciating, Ardra :))
wonderful poem dedicated to your sister...love the shape of it...the perfect symmetry responding to the birth of those we will hold and treasure in our hands and in our hearts.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one and your words, Jacob.
are you sure youre not a mom? you really sound like a mom lol.
this was really nice to read, and really sweet.
i told you you were the nicest person ive ever met

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

I'm sure you have a dark side. Thank god I'm not in the line of fire XD
You're like those cat.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yet. ;)
Eeeh, being compared to cats is the worst thing you could do to me 😑😬😵😛 l.. read more
Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

Said every cat ever :P
What an amazing tribute and form poem. When the form of the poem makes it that much stronger You can be assured you hit the nail on the head, and you did that here. The tone and subject matter are as sweet and endearing as it gets and the emotions are really fleshed out well. Exceptional piece!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I tried to kill two birds with one stone, so to speak. ;)
I'm glad you appreciate. Thank you.. read more

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