Naivety

Naivety

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Random scribbles. Spontaneous write.

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My naivety knows
no limits,

in love with
the idea of love,

I seek solace
in your words.


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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looking for solace in my words??? she is naive ;))) of course thats not how i read this Dr. you leave the place of solace completely to the reader ..could be a hot bath..hot tattie, hot momma ;) my first thought is to my Bible and prayer ..my greatest place of comfort ...you poem starts with innocence ..then a realization that comes from experience ... and then a more real turning to someone either in person to talk to ..or perhaps a poet one especially "hears" ... such a simple poem that sparks so many avenues for me.. i think of trying to guide my children who suffered that anomaly of in love with love .. oh such dread i had ..especially for my girls ...whats a dad to do? ;}
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'm glad it sparked such thoughts, Einstein (on a ligter note, you chose your penname well 😉) read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

:) .......................



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Ohh!! something I can relate to so very well!! I can be as naive as You can dear Yuman lol to be sweetly naughty in love adds more excitement, so keep that little girl of You play here and there sometimes, sweet and lovely one, thank You*

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Guess we've all had our fair share of naivety ;) I agree, it does add a touch of adventure momentari.. read more
A crisp, beautiful and emotional piece.. I love this!
Great job Yumna! :))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you like it. :)
Nice to see you back around here 😊
Mr.Writer

2 Years Ago

No problem Yumna! :) Thank youu
looking for solace in my words??? she is naive ;))) of course thats not how i read this Dr. you leave the place of solace completely to the reader ..could be a hot bath..hot tattie, hot momma ;) my first thought is to my Bible and prayer ..my greatest place of comfort ...you poem starts with innocence ..then a realization that comes from experience ... and then a more real turning to someone either in person to talk to ..or perhaps a poet one especially "hears" ... such a simple poem that sparks so many avenues for me.. i think of trying to guide my children who suffered that anomaly of in love with love .. oh such dread i had ..especially for my girls ...whats a dad to do? ;}
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'm glad it sparked such thoughts, Einstein (on a ligter note, you chose your penname well 😉) read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

:) .......................
we just keep looking in all the wrong places...and find the same thing....but we never learn, do we?
i eventually learned but i think i would rather still be naive...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I agree with your thoughts. Thank you for your words here, Jacob. Appreciated.

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