Introduction

Do you see the secret message in this one? It's been bolded out.

A man that darkness must fear

Let all demons and spirits scatter

Another dimension this one walks to

Never mentally stable!

 

Hell approaches him dangerously

Alcohol only fuels him everyday

Rage can be seen through his eyes

Killing is his only job

Isolated from humanity

Smile only triggered by violence

Oblivion awaits for him

Never mentally stable!

Proceed to the path of Epic Grim

To meet the path that goes dim

Travel with the Dark Exorcist

Through a journey that is full of twist

Author's Note

So do you see the secret subject of this one? What do you think?

Reviews

[Writer #00]

It's always nice to use poems as a book introduction. I like to integrate them into my books, as well, to enhance the story-- I'm glad someone else does so too. Great intro.

[Xerclipse]

Thanks, and it is rare to see poetry and books go together like this. However the book is where the meat is for the story. This story is kind of outdated but i have thought of re writing this book. Please feel free to read the story and tell me how it is so i can fix it. This was in script form (and still is) but i would change that first.

[Writer #00]

Will do... was this meant to be a screenplay or comic before?

[Xerclipse]

a comic

[FrancescaX]

saw the secret message alright. nice way to get ur audience and direct them to the book.
explanatory and succint. you hav just told us who aln is without qualms.
good

[Xerclipse]

thanks.....and there is more to Alan when you read the book. But warning: Intricate plot and heavy violence is ahead

[RachelReaper]

I think I like this guy already Heh-heh. And yes, I really do like this poem, its kind of like a portrait poem I did for my character Eli, and it adequately describes him.

[Xerclipse]

Lol I will have to check that out soon.

[Xerclipse]

I added another part to this poem. What do you think of it?

[RachelReaper]

nice lines, I like the first two lines of the last stanza the best.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

nice poem lol
not many ppl start off books with poetry

[Xerclipse]

I added another part to this poem, what do you think of the new part?