Time to admit defeat

Eh...another worthless creation.

The sun turned red,
Then it went out,
Now its dark.
All the stars turned their backs,
Now light is nowhere to be found.
Not even in the distance.

The flames lost their fuel,
Soon they'll go out.


Floating above my body,
The voice tells me to say goodbye
Before i disappear forever.
There is no heaven,
There is no hell.
Only the infinite nothing waits for me.

A tight tunnel,
Heading towards the other end,
Just to pop up, in the big, empty, black nothing.

Flow blood, flow.
Another minute and its all over.
Flow blood flow.
Take the pain and go.

Without him there is no point,
Without him there never was,
And never will be.

So i question everything i foolishly believed in.
I thought that in good or sorrow
You'll be there, but you're not.
I'll be honest, wont say that i'm not mad at those who made you do this. I hate them more than anything. I want to end them.
But its no use,
So i'm left with no choice.
Time to go down in flames,
Time to admit defeat.

Author's Note

Will delete this one too...

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

F**k life......double time.

[613]

Think positively! Things always turn around. (:

Know you can talk to me whenever you like!

- Brittney

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

[Jamestown]

I agree with both of the reviews thus far, please know you have people
here who care and are willing to help:) I hope writing some of your feelings
is helping, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

of course they're is a heaven and a hell,but all you see now a days is agaist god

[AaronFreitas]

Damn IM... oh wait you changed your name haha... love that you're getting your feelings out. You know you have a friend here :) Keep your head up :)