Its a mess

Its a mess

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Title says it all.

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So where are ya?
You say,
That i must stay,
Or you wont play.
They will pay,
Even if my dead body will sway
In the great wind's way.
So where are you?


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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were you feeling abandoned when you wrote this one?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Just A little...
I wouldn't play games. I hate games in a relationship. I've been there done that and I just can't do it anymore. No one is worth it. I wish you luck though sweetie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thanks. Yeah...i'm not exactly playin games with anyone. Since my relationship with my boy was ended.. read more
Nice rhyming... definitely feel the words... everyone goes through times like this. Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)

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Added on May 13, 2015
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Dani The Unreviewed
Dani The Unreviewed

Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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