End

The past falls in flames,
Devils playin their games.

Cursed world, the end draws closer.

Tears, blood sweat,
Call for a new fight.
Dark it went, the last light...

Cursed world, the end draws near.
Cursed world, existance is death.

Weigts pull me back down,
Its time to drown.
For me there aint no other way.
All your smiles were fake,
Its more than what you can take.

Cursed world, the end draws near.

Reviews

[Dark Poet]

I loved how this felt like a short song, not just a poem. And because of this it made it more emotional.again, you rhyme very well without it sounding too formatted

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It was inspired by a song. Thank you very much :)

[Wasekera S Chiphazi Ban..]

I think you are just as good as your friends.. Nice poem..

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much.