Cornered

Not long ago,
I'd say its a long way to go.
No...thats a lie now.
The time has come...its now.

Push me off the stairs?
Really?
Aint there anythin else you can threaten with?
Well, come on.
Yeah, you heard it right.
Come on.

Be ready to die yourself,
Cause I've had enough,
Totally fed up.
Prepare for battle.
Ya think i'm runnin away,
You'd like that.

No...no way out,
So come on,
Last fight,
Yeah, give me that flight,
Come an push me off.
Why am i still standin?

Big mouth...all talk, no game.
Come on, where is that arrogance?
Where did your big mouth go?
Next time bring a knife,
And be ready to loose your life,
Or take mine.
Don't care whats the price,
But this stops now.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Brilliant write, when you have taken so much and finally had enough! Love this! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

"be ready to loose your life,
Or take mine.
Don't care whats the price,
But this stops now."

Some people can be fed up indeed with abuse or torture in any form. I heart the liberation voice in this marvelous one...:)............

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[A writer]

I think i haven't seen this one before. As usual, an awesome work. As for where did their arrogance go... I think they realised who are they messin with. Lol. But really, a well done piece. By the way...is this true? did someone threaten you with pushing you off the stairs?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, its true. My stupid neighbor. But i told the cops already. Don't worry. And thank you. By the way...are you writin anythin new yet?

[A writer]

Oh my...well you did right...I mean telling the cops. And yeah, I'm writing a new poem. I want it to be really good. I would be honored if you could help me out with it, before I publish.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You want my help? you have no idea how much that means to me. Thank you. And yeah, just send it in the message, i'll try to help you. :)

[A writer]

Yes. i'm your number one fan remember?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Aww...that is so sweet of you. :) thanks.

[A writer]

NO problem. :)