A moment before death

I'm dead,
My hands, my head,
Bullet holes they had,
Lines like these you've read,
Many times before.
It feels like dread.

Got a cigarette,
Do you have a light?
Maybe you wanna see the fright?
Go, walk through,
The images of your life,
Put down that knife,
No need for violence.

You see?
The film, the memories,
Dancing around, as short stories,
Put in categories,
Theyre travelin over a metropolise.

Reviews

[Jack Burney-Cumming]

I was intrigued by the title and I like the dark vibe I'm getting from it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[A writer]

This is awesome. Dark, but not too much. I love reading your dark poetry, it is sooo... It suits you very well. I believe, after I have read through many other dark poems on this site (They are all great!) that you are the absolute best when it comes to writing dark poetry. You are the best that ever was. Keep writing Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. Thanks for the compliment :) but i find it hard to believe that i'm the best in writin dark poems...or anythin else for that matter. But still, thanks.

[A writer]

It is clear to me now... You do not take my compliments seriously... Why? Either way... You are the best!!! Nobody can say otherwise, because it is the truth! Even if someone says that you are not the greatest poet ever, I will always believe that you are. You are number one to me. Love you Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah right..................................................................... Anyways, thank you.

[A writer]

Yes! It is true!!! And you are welcome :)