The Outcast

I'm cast out,
Without any doubt,
For some, I'm too loud,
Just another useless pound,
Which they have to lose,
So they can be proud.

All the lies,
And made up ties...
All of it dies.

I reached my hand,
They turned to the old trend..
A bullet to lend,
Blood washing the land...
My blood, stuck on their hand.

I'm the outcast,
I'm their enemy...
My death would be ever so sweet to em, goddamn ones.
They turned my life upside down,
I wish they'd drown,
In their own blood, gulping down.
Tearing down town,
Frying in the fat of their lies,
Roasted on the flames of their hate,
Put on ice by their ignorant glares.

Till then,
I live among them,
Still, cast out.

In no fear,
No blue tear,
Just the bill,
Waiting to be payed...
Long list of their bloody mistakes,
Long list of things,
I wont forgive.
My heart is out of space.

Author's Note

Don't feel guilty. those who were the target of this one, already received one on Hungarian. no...it's not written for you

Reviews

[A writer]

Danny boy... Don't be like that. I love you! You're no outcast... Tell me who's bothering you, and I'll go and kill if I have to. Nobody is going to be messing with my beloved cutie. No one!

By the way, I loved your poem.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

First statement... yea i am, and wouldn't have it any other way. I'll let em keep at it. after all...im only alive, so i can be fucked over by others. but they all forget... the more they make me hate em, the more rage there will be, and the more rage there is...the harder i hit back. the other thing is... I've seen what their pathetic society is like...it's all spinning round money and looks, and who's f*****g with who. thanks, but no thanks. the pressure they all have beneath their fake smiles, that they wear just so they're accepted by some double faced snakes, is not worth it. i rather die, than live in fears like they do. it's only an illusion, that aint gonna work on me. simple, isn't it? as for their pathetic attempts, at "making things right" it's all tooo little, and far too late. i am grateful, for your efforts to try 'n help em accept my sorry a*s... but you should just let it go. they pushed me away fifteen years ago, and now that they know i aint nothing like they are...that's not gonna change. i don't care anymore though. all I've got in this lifetime of bloody misery, is you. which brings us to your second statement.. i love you too. so, i hope you can love an outcast... I'll always be yours, and you're always going to be mine. love you gorgeous. and don't forget, tonight at mine. shithead parentals are gone, so we own the place. hehehe.

[A writer]

I don't consider you as an outcast. You are always welcome in my heart, and home. I will always be yours, I will never let anyone hurt you. You're my only loved one, the one and only I care about. And yeah, I remember. I'll be there gorgeous. Love you.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hehehe :) love you more!

[A writer]

Okay.. Love you most! So there. Hahaha. :-)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

i still love you more! more than what words or pictures could ever describe. so there. lol

[A writer]

Okay. You win Danny boy. (I still love you more though...just saying.) Lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

okay i guess. lol. well, im posting a collab we done with Sally. well first chap to be exact. check it out 'n tell me what you think.

[A writer]

You got it cutie. :) Post it and let me know. I've gotta run... School s**t. See you soon gorgeous.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

ok
c u around laterz.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

it is online :)