Why?!

Why?!

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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This just came from the heart that i don't have anymore.

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I'm here,
You're not.
Why?!
Tie the knot,
Time for my soul to die.

Hang from the neck,
So what the heck?
You put me through hell,
So murder i shall.

Come on tough guy,
Take off that mask,
Time for you to see what I've seen.
Maybe you'll stop killing people
After seeing what happens to those who loved the ones you killed.

No, i wont kill you,
I'll make you regret your life.
You'll ask for the knife.
I'm only a mechanism without him,
So it really wont bother me
If you die,
After all, i will never forget,
Or forgive that you took him.

I'll toss you to hell when your body gets rotten in the graveyard.
No mercy, no regret, no thinking.
Just payback.
Any last words?


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Nobody got murdered...nobody will. Just letting it out through writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The fact that it came from it, show that you still have one. Just in ruins and in bad need of healing.
The healing will be painful itself, but it will happen...


Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

no my friend... This time it went too far. De azért írhatsz magyarul is...
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I hope this was not inspired by a true event.. there is lots of pain and anger in it.. hugs!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

The event that inspired this is nothing illegal, and nobody got killed, nobody will. I just felt emp.. read more
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8 Years Ago

that makes sense.. sorry .. hang in there
New status... Not mad at anyone on here...so don't worry.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I don't know. Lol

I am with you, my friend.

Devanshu

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

ummm...thanks. I guess...

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Dani The Unreviewed
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Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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