Move out!

Rage...not mad at anyone here.

I sold a lot of time,
No...no regret this time.
Others lived besides me,
Yet i was still alone.
My time will come,
I will move out from here,
Nobody stand on my way.

For a long time,
I covered my face,
Now, the mask comes off...
Will you still dare to look into my eyes, and turn your back?

Now. Move out now.
No more regret,
No more sorry,
Don't want forgiveness from judas.
Ignorance wont save you,
Say your last words,
And get ready for hell.

Author's Note

Any thoughts are welcome...as always... And as usual, there is meaning behind the words.

Reviews

[RiverRei]

I love this. So very sad but I know exactly how you're feeling through this. I've been there and it's not fun and very lonely. I'm glad that you've moved on with your life and taken off the mask that has been holding you back. I like you and I know that others will too. They will be people who love you for who you are, not who they want you to be. Very nice write sweetie. Love your stuff :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much:)

[J.A. Marquez]

It sounds like you are finding a way to overcome the things holding you back. I am so glad you are letting it out, too. Nice work.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for the review. And yeah, i'm seeing no way out....but i'm still looking for it.

[E G TEN]

Another piece worthy for the Infernal Machine Show!
A bit aggressive, but only time can heal us.. so let it out!
And don't hold back... now let me go checkout
That story of yours.. laterz"

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much:)

[sereenaoutloud]

There is only so much anyone can take before the gloves come off..or in this case the mask!! You feel every word in your writes it is what i love about them! so strong the word hit you !
Brillant!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[Jeyanthi]

As usual there is a flow beneath your words...
i like the second Stanza...
poker face don't stays so long...!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for the review.