...ok...i'm not ok...

Here i stand,
All alone, a handful of sand,
Only missin the witch,
So which is which?
Oh right...the switch.
What everyone does to me is ditch.

Reviews

[RiverRei]

I love the form and rhyme scheme here. Short piece but still has so much meaning. I'll be your witch! I use to practice Wicca in high school, I wouldn't mind getting back into it lol. I'll repeat though, YOU ARE NOT ALONE. I'm here for you. I love the idea of sand running through fingers...the imagery behind it as well as the meaning you can place with it. Love it. You're an amazing poet, my friend. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you so much :)

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I love your dark Poetry , I do

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Another part of what i feel inside.