IN MY DREAMS  (Free Verse)

IN MY DREAMS (Free Verse)

A Chapter by Dhaye
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you're there

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I believe in forever
Hoping that one day
My dreams would come true
Somehow
Relying only on the voice of my heart
I dreamed of a thousand mornings
As ours
Many sunshine and moonlights
To be our soft blankets
As I embrace you tightly
Like holding you forever in my arms

There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter
And only you and I
There I can hold your hand
As I stay next to you
And smile on the next phases
Of my life
With you beside me
And yes,

It's always in my dreams.





© 2014 Dhaye



Author's Note

Dhaye



Special credits to: Neil Aranda's "There is a Place" for letting me use a line same as in the said piece.

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"There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter"

A good description on heaven even in your dream to be with him for eternity. Soft imagery and sentiments in your words...Bravo.............


Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...........



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Oh wow, that is a real heart melting poem. So much tenderness and romances flows from it that is is very intoxicating.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, cowboy. Having a writer's block again so I'm just re-featuring an old work.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

Well glad you did cause I missed this gem of yours when it was posted.
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

............. =)
Beautiful and fabulous write up. The lucidity in your writing is just commendable. The expressions are superb and very understood. Thanks for such a great share. God Bless you and keep making us crave for more of your works.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Chiradeep.
I'm a firm believer in hope and this poem is filled with optimism. Sometimes our dreams are where we spend much of our lives, but thank God for the power of dreams, and the courage to make those dreams into a reality. Very nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Eddie.
Ate, one of the sweetest poems of yours I've read. It's delicate and soft. A bliss to read. One of your best, I think.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Blue. You're one of the sweetest persons here. =)
beautiful words and expressions. enjoyed this piece and the beautiful music:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Melecia.
This had a beautiful fairytale quality to it. It was transcending.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Purple Q. =)
You have out-done yourself with this poem Dhaye! It's so beautiful and emotional, filled with every emotion possible - sadness, hope and more.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Wow! Thanks, Michael. I appreciate your visit today.

Actually, I went there in your pag.. read more
Michael (Letters and Lifelines)

3 Years Ago

Lol i've been a little busy but i should be posting something soon.
Crestfallen indeed, but dreams can and do come true so never give up !

A touching forlorn poem yet with a sanguine overtone, splendid indeed my friend !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Wow! How I missed those kind words from you, Tom. Thank you so much!
Tom

3 Years Ago

My pleasure !
"There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter"

A good description on heaven even in your dream to be with him for eternity. Soft imagery and sentiments in your words...Bravo.............


Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...........
Dhaye, most of the time your work always remind me of a song. Reading this piece made me hum Les Miserables’ “I Dreamed a Dream” and “On my Own” because the songs’ concepts are somewhat similar to your theme.

I think that our ability to imagine or to dream is an attribute that help us to be flexible in times of adversities. Very well-penned.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Dreaming is one of hobbies. Hehe. "There You'll Be" is one of my fave songs and it is my muse in thi.. read more
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Dreaming is one of my hobbies. LOL. "There You'll Be" is one of my fave songs and it is my muse in t.. read more

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