Staring in the eyes of darkness

Staring in the eyes of darkness

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In the eyes,
That stare, from behind the cries,
They stare back at me,
A never ending circle,
Why did the sky turn purple?
Or is it just a dream?
Maybe a nightmare?

In the black night, sparkling flares,
Seems like someone still dares,
To hope they get saved,
But will anyone care?
Hopes die, with the sparks they fly,
And turn into smoke,
That was all for hope.

The epidem alarm is screaming...
The noise stretched out long,
Climbing up,
And slowly going down.

The infection now spread,
The world dead,
Hey kid, where's your dad?
It feels like dread.
Or am I just dead?
Its fight for ourselves,
Free for all, stand up and fall.

A moment wasted,
Someone's scull busted,
Jesus!
God!
Allah!
They scream,
Before they explode into cream.
Welcome to a never ending dream,
Or is it just a nightmare?
Another, from the many,
That we all call reality.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Dani The Unreviewed
So you read it all the way. Thanks. What do ya think, about the meaning?

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The poem create many meaning and thoughts.
"The infection now spread,
The world dead,
Hey kid, where's your dad?
It feels like dread.
Or am I just dead?
Its fight for ourselves,
Free for all, stand up and fall. "
Had the feel of war and struggle. I did like the honest tone leading to the true ending. No-one will win with violence and war as the world lead. Powerful thoughts left the reader with many things to think about. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I have been telling people. If we don't change. It will be a "Mad Max" world. Old movie could be ne.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

The saddest thing about that, is that it is true! sometimes i wonder, how long is humanity going to .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are right. I have been saying for many years. Will take a great city to die for us to learn. All.. read more



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Hey IM, your writing just gets better by every minute..
But you still holds on to that Infernal style which is unique
And raw,, impressive my friend" glad that things had settled
Down for you :-) Thanks for Sharing! :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) :) :)
A war and its aftermath......This is tragic.The use of words and exclamation really made me picturise the whole scenario as to how the people affected must be weeping,wailing and screaming.What would have been happening there.The reference to modern modes of warfare and purple sky is totally apt.You have got an eye for war.......Strong write,Danny!;D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Okay. I've read this all the way. It looks to me as if you wrote about the devastion left after a war... More specifically a war where bio weapons were used. Like viruses, or something. Anyways it was a great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A writer

8 Years Ago

And they call themselves "Patriots" hahahaha don't make me laugh. You're a patriot if you destroy th.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Totally agree on that! Its bullshit. If you wanna be a so called patriot, then look for your country.. read more
A writer

8 Years Ago

I wish everyone in the right position to make a difference, would see that. And seems to me you are .. read more

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