Finale

Finale

A Chapter by Miss Sally Sunshine

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"My brother? I don't have a brother." I said, slightly confused.

 

"Yes you do." said Demetry, in his deep throughted voice. "He's standing right before you."

 

Adian looked up at me, with those big hazel eyes, and smiled. I could tell the resmblance imediately.

 

"Hi Adian." I whispered.

 

He waved to me. "Hi sissy." He, like most little kids, had a slight lisp so it came out like "Hi thithy."

 

"You know who I am?" I asked him.

 

He nodded, still smiling. He let go of Luca's hand and walked over to me.

 

"If you try to run with him, you won't make it alive." Orpheus said, extremely calm, like he was dicussing a book.

 

Adian continued to walk over to me, he didn't even acknowledge what Orpheus said.

 

Adian stopped right in front of me and he pulled a little golden locket from out from under his shirt.

 

The locket was in the shape of a heart, and he showed me the back of the locket. It said "Love from sissy -Jade" Then he opened the locket and there was a pictuer of me on one side and a picture of him on the other.

 

"That's you." Adian said pointing to my picture.

 

"Yeah, that is me." I whispered, stunned.

 

Adian smiled bigger, and hugged my leg. I pushed him off of me, lowered myself to his level and gave him a big hug. I lifted him up off the ground and twirled him around, eventually settling him on my hip. I brushed his hair off his forehead and planted a kiss there. He giggled and burried his face in my hair.

 

"Okay. That's enough." Orpheus sighed. "Luca seize the boy."

 

Luca started towards us, and an extremely strong maternal instinct took over my body. I had just found out I had a brother, I was not letting him go, not yet.

 

"Don't touch him." I growled, shifting my body so that I was infront of Adian, shielding him from Luca.

 

"I'm not playing games with you, Jade. Give him to me." Luca growled.

 

I stood defiantely in front of Luca, not moving.

 

Luca quickly dashed around me, and yanked Adian out of my arms.

 

I started to go after Luca, but Demetry held me back.

 

Adain started crying, and reaching for me. I wanted to run to him and make him feel better, but I couldn't because of Demetry.

 

Luca walked over to the wooden table and four cuffs popped out of the wood, the right length apart for Luca to strap down his arms and legs. His arms were strapped above his head.

 

"Do you wish to join us yet?" Prunella asked.

 

"Never." I hissed, putting as much venom into my word as I could.

 

"I guess we have to use force then. Pity." Orpheus sighed.

 

Orpheus nodded to Luca, and he started to turn a crank around and around. Adian started to cry harder and I looked closely at him.

 

I gasped. Each time Luca turned the handle around, it streached Adian, like one of those old time tourtures.

 

Thsi made me angrier than every before. I didn't feel anything. I didn't see anything.

 

I realized that I was probably heating up. Demetry dropped me, and I felt myself sprinting towards the king and queen. 

 

Luca ran out to meet me, but he didn't get more than a few feet before I blasted him with a huge fire ball. It hit him square in the chest.

 

I felt myself lifting up off the ground, and I was running in the air. I was surprised that I still haven't reached them yet.

 

I could still hear Adian crying and I could hear Orpheus and Prunella laughing.

 

I bright light blided me, and I stopped running and I floated in mid-air. 

 

"You will never save him. You will join us. You will enslave the humani's." Prunella's and Orpheus's voices chorused.

 

I screamed, but it wasn't mine. It was inhuman, and shrill.

 

I kept running towards them faster, and faster. My feet barely touching the ground as I ran. 

 

I advanced on Orpheus and Prunella, I could see they're frightened expressions on there faces.

 

"Now, wait. We-" Orpheus started but he didn't get to finish. I blasted him full in the face with a extremely hot stream of lava. I didn't even watch as he melted away, I just turned to Prunella as she screamed her head off. I didn't even wait before I sent a stream of lava straight into her face as well. 

 

My fires started to leak out of me, along with all my strength.

 

I collapsed onto the floor in a heap, and I fell away, the darkness enclosing me. I slipped away in the midst of all the chaos.



© 2011 Miss Sally Sunshine




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Oh my God. This story is brilliant. It's got a life and a power to it that I've never seen in any other book on here. It's certainly one of the best books I've ever read ever, not just on here. It's got a ton of potencial and the storyline is one of the most creative as well. I feel for Jade every moment, and I find myself falling into her tormented world. I love this story, and I'm eager to see how it ends. At the same time, however, I don't want it to end. Because this story is just so good that I want to relish every moment of it. Well done, my friend. Well done. :D

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Oh my God. This story is brilliant. It's got a life and a power to it that I've never seen in any other book on here. It's certainly one of the best books I've ever read ever, not just on here. It's got a ton of potencial and the storyline is one of the most creative as well. I feel for Jade every moment, and I find myself falling into her tormented world. I love this story, and I'm eager to see how it ends. At the same time, however, I don't want it to end. Because this story is just so good that I want to relish every moment of it. Well done, my friend. Well done. :D

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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OMG! Please write more. i'm gonna die!!!

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