The Painter

The Painter

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Colors of red, black and gray

Not other hues, a big dismay

The shadows of my past go with red

Of jealousy and distrust, agony and hatred

Black was my sin, and my dying hope when I was once betrayed was gray.


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© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Great words, beautifully concepted stunning progression. Love the senses injected in this brilliant work. Thanks Dhaye for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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a painted life of someone in the past
~ gray is in astray ~ red, you'll bleed ~ black, the lonely you ~
that's what i see, in this painted reality of someone who goes through such painful agony

Great one kabayan!


Posted 8 Years Ago


You weave a tale well with these three colors. Great form - very unique!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Rita. I appreciate your nice words. :)

Yes it is difficult to paint a life with only three colors. But I trust a true artist can see beautiful things out of the ordinary. No wonder those colors were already in your past:) A very good poem with a good format, nothing left unstated:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Maryanne. :)
Mary Ann M.

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :D
It's difficult to paint a life that has only three colors...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Tags: limerick, poem, painter, color, life, past

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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