A Confession To The Wind

A Confession To The Wind

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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A prose

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Dear Wind,

It's been so long since we met and became friends.
No, I mean, you became my friend and treated you as the best.
I really mean it. You don't know how I was thankful
for that friendship that we had. I idolized you
and valued every word from you.
I was asking myself if what's wrong in being a friend.
I cried for so many hours, days, weeks and months
and like a fool, I dreamed that someday I'll see you
in this small world of ours.
That time, I was calling you Rain,
for every time I remember your name or the picture of you in my mind,
there comes a heavy downpour here in my heart.
But you've been so cold-hearted.
I died.

But somehow, an angel came and brought me to life once again.
He said his name is Rain. I learned so many
lessons from him. And oh, I was surprised with the truth about rain-
that it doesn't always mean pain. It can heal. It can wash the soul.

So I realized your name shouldn't be Rain.
That's why now I shall call  you Wind...








© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Beautiful and gentle thoughts in the poetry.
"So I realized your name shouldn't be Rain.
That's why now I shall call you Wind..."
I liked how you led to the above ending. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Beautiful and gentle thoughts in the poetry.
"So I realized your name shouldn't be Rain.
That's why now I shall call you Wind..."
I liked how you led to the above ending. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Wow I read this...and thought to myself...I can relate to some extent...for me personally...
nice write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words.
We can see friendship in so many ways and be friends even with nature and the natural elements. This was very unique and creative...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. Nice take on my poem. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)
A unique and enviable relationship, you seem to have cultivated here, very well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheema. :)
When we begin to take our adversities in such a thoughtful way, thr road to enlightment starts shining ahead. Superb write Dhaye!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Divya. :)
Sometimes a little rain must fall for the flowers to bloom !

A beautiful free spirited poem !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tom. :)

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