FIVE

FIVE

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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It's been so long...

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Who won't be amazed of how smart you are?
Who won't be glad seeing you as my little star?
It's been so long that I held you in my arm
Like a fragile thing, I had never let anything to harm

I am old but was "young" to be responsible, I know
I have no experience, have nothing to show
But I tried my best to give everything that  I am
I didn't think of what will happen when tomorrows come

At five I know you are too smart as a little guy
There are things that only you can do, we can't deny
I promise to be the best woman in your life, my little man
I will always love you and give the best that I can...






© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
In his 5th...

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Indeed, such is the joy and wonderment to be found within every child, our paternal instincts naturally bond with ultra amazing and unbreakable strength !

An edifying, infectiously warm poetic short write !

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Tom.
aww this so sweet! and such an endearing poem written like a letter. Nothing like a mother's love!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful Dhaye. This is so very touching and a sweet reminder of youth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Jack. :)

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Added on March 5, 2014
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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