Till Death Do Us Apart

Till Death Do Us Apart

A Chapter by Closed
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I suck at love poems :p

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I love you
I love you too

I miss these words
coming from you
while we didn't even look
at each other
when I would be looking at the sky 
searching for the brightest star
to ask what I wished the most
you
Only to find
you lookin' right at me 
'cause maybe you found it
in my very eyes
what you wished for
me
And we vowed
till death do us apart
and that it did 
you've been afar for too long
but like a constant ache
that never subsides
because
Pain demands to be felt
and that I feel
constantly reminding me
that maybe 
we would still have been together 
this valentine's day...



© 2017 Closed



Author's Note

Closed
I wanted this to be a valentine's day special.. Apparently didn't work lol

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There is no feeling that is sweeter than looking into someone's eyes and seeing a reflection of your own love there.
But somewhere along the road things go wrong and we are left with sorrow and regrets.
The pain of your words are so evident in this beautiful poem.
I wish you all the best for the coming Valentine's day.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

11 Months Ago

Quite a perspective! I appreciate that..
TeeJae {TJ} Hart

11 Months Ago

Very much agree shabeeh
Shabeeh Haider

11 Months Ago

Thank you T J for agreeing


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There is no feeling that is sweeter than looking into someone's eyes and seeing a reflection of your own love there.
But somewhere along the road things go wrong and we are left with sorrow and regrets.
The pain of your words are so evident in this beautiful poem.
I wish you all the best for the coming Valentine's day.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

11 Months Ago

Quite a perspective! I appreciate that..
TeeJae {TJ} Hart

11 Months Ago

Very much agree shabeeh
Shabeeh Haider

11 Months Ago

Thank you T J for agreeing
oops it is so romantic ,you put it in a way that makes me to feel like telling all that to someone

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

11 Months Ago

Hey, thank you so much Debora! Truly appreciate your words! ☺
deborah

11 Months Ago

welcome,,alot

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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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