Composure

Experimental. Writing off my weird mind and heart. Another attempt at poetry.

the night plays ~

fancy images

hover

high up in the sky,

a make believe

truth,

a half spoken lie.

The tell tale

signs

of my throbbing heart

unable to hide the

sweet

composure I wrap myself in,

as the night ~ plays.

Reviews

[Mirror]

"a make believe
truth,
a half spoken lie."

Sound like a lyric. Nice nice nice one.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well, didn't intend it to be but glad it comes off as that :) thank you for appreciating this write. (:

[BBP]

So soft and flows so well it hides a deep meaning possibly a dark one ... so obviously I love it 😍

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, you judged right ;) thank you so much for appreciating this one, Bev :))

[Jibey]

Perceptive and recognizable... the right justification and the careful construction hold together this emotional gem. 'Sweet composure'... very Yumna :-)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:p haha maybe ;) thank you so much for your words here, Jibey. Glad you appreciate 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

The words rolls like a song. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to nice ending. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Coyote. Glad you like it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Relic]

Often, when we are enamored with someone our head is in the clouds and composure becomes a test. I've been there.

~And yes, this is poetry~ :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, and what a test it is...
Thank you so much for your words here, Tim. I appreciate 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pretty romantic write...relationships can be that way...like a beautiful half-moon...and the night sounds like a symphony...

nicely done.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Like a symphony, beautiful description..thank you, Jacob. Glad you like it 😊

[emmajoy]

' unable to hide the
sweet
composure I wrap myself in,
as the night ~ plays. '

Beautiful writing, beautiful meaning, beautiful...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your words and for appreciating, Emma. 😊💜

[emmajoy]

Smiling happy thoughts.. ..