As the night returns...

Experimental writing. Just writing it out...

I am awake 

in the light of you 

which sparkles my day.

I am awake

in the dawn which

unearths the musty shadows.

I am awake

as the night returns

hearing your gaze whisper;

till the night blooms ~ 

and you remain oblivious 

to the uneasiness which haunts me

while I am ~ awake...

Reviews

[Kesha]

I really enjoyed reading this! It seems hopeful in a sense! Hope your night/day is lovely

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you enjoyed this piece :)
I hope yours is too 😊

[Kesha]

You're welcome and it's okay, just at work :P

[BBP]

I can relate to this in every way possible!

Sleep likes to avoid me way too often and im more 'awake' in situations to which I wish I was oblivious lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah yeah ditto! Lol
Thank you, Bev. Appreciate your words :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Awake is multifaceted here..
Pain lives far past is presence .
And ghost have the loudest cries.

Well Done.

Jazzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I appreciate your words here :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Poet............... J.J.

[Mr.Writer]

I was shaking when I finished reading this!
The imagery I'm getting is absolutely gorgeous...
The emotions are well poured and highlight the poem!
Keep it up Yumna

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you felt the emotions here :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem, I indeed did :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Beautifully written. In night, we love. In day, we wonder & doubt. So very true. "I am awake in the light of you"-stunning line. "Hearing your gaze whisper". Love this!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Annette. I appreciate your words here 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

these kinds of memories, we can''t erase...the "what if's"
the love squandered----
always ending up back in the same place...
destiny so unkind...even when there is a beautiful moon that should enhance the love...there is no love to enhance.
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True. And the worst kind is the uncertainty of being or not being in love..

Thank you for your thoughts here, Jacob. I appreciate it.