A Tale ~ of Forbidden Love

A Tale ~ of Forbidden Love

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. A challenge (?) or as close to it as I could get.

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A Tale ~ of Forbidden Love


With smiles and laughs that tinted her cheeks,

she adorns this earth in beauty and grace.

With fingers that trail on notes to speak,

and music which fell right back in its place.


When winds sang songs of love in the air, 

hearts then rejoiced in each other's embrace.

Vanished abrupt, as if never there,

creases which danced between the forehead space.


In picturesque beauty like the night skies,

she walked, vowing to holy gods above,

stroking  scars unfaded on her thighs;

wrote 'pon stars, a tale ~ of forbidden love.  



© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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This poem is a beautiful piece. Very well thought-out, the rhymes coincide together nicely and the poem overall has a very smooth rhythm to it. The picture chosen is nice as well as the imagery painted. Though overall the subtle implication of suicide (it seems) is there, and a sad thing to think on as to what this "forbidden love" could be.


Thanks for sharing, look forward to seeing more of your work.
~CarthageThorne


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the lovely review, Carthage. I'm glad you appreciate. I do like how you percei.. read more



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looks good, sounds good and my word, it is good........ N

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Nev! Glad you appreciate :-))
Neville

8 Months Ago

It was lovely my friend, very lovely indeed..
These words that flow from you here seem to come from ancient spaces. Thoughts of stars guiding the soul, awakening paths for the feet to now forbidden places, dark spaces of the life. It is a haunting beauty that is covered in scars, the survivor of pain still forging a place in this world. Profoundly moving, dear poet, dear friend.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Craig. Glad you were moved. :)
This poem is a beautiful piece. Very well thought-out, the rhymes coincide together nicely and the poem overall has a very smooth rhythm to it. The picture chosen is nice as well as the imagery painted. Though overall the subtle implication of suicide (it seems) is there, and a sad thing to think on as to what this "forbidden love" could be.


Thanks for sharing, look forward to seeing more of your work.
~CarthageThorne


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the lovely review, Carthage. I'm glad you appreciate. I do like how you percei.. read more
and thank you for the inspiration...i was in a writing zone when i read your piece and it inspired me to write one on love...will post in future.
i love reading poetry and finding that it triggers the fingers to move across the keys.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for both of your lovely reviews here, Jacob. Glad to have been an inspiration to y.. read more
nice rhyme scheme makes this flow so nicely...and the passion is felt in the song...

i always associate love with music....the two go hand in hand like a couple dancing in the moonlight.
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem is wonderful. Filled with the energy and the drive of love. I had to read again. Thank you dear friend. You create a masterpiece.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating, John. Glad you like it :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my dear friend.

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